In the reminder from business director of a TV channel, It is expressed that to draw in more watchers and to abstain from losing promoting revunes, Manager has wanted to commit time to climate and nearby news to its underlying level. This end depends on objections from watchers and withdrawl of notices from the station. This contention comprises of three suspicions, which are inspected beneath. To assess the contention beneath outlandish suspicions must be inspected and creator needs to give legitimate proof.
Most importantly, Manager accept that less time is given to climate and nearby news. How signicant is this less time. Maybe, it may be not less when considered with past year's climate and nearby news time. Maybe, there may be under 10 minutes contrast in time when contrasted with a year ago's climate and nearby news time. Administrator needs to give adequate proof so as to know assess the contention. On the off chance that this situation has merit, this contention doesn't hold any water.
Besides, administrator accept that dropping of neighborhood publicizing contracts is because of late-night programs communicated in the station. Maybe, there may be some others factors. Maybe, nearby publicizing comapnies have seen loses and may be closing down their bussiness in this way, as they don't need promoting they may drop their agreements. Maybe, divert isn't useful in increment of benefits for the adversting organizations. On the off chance that both of these situations demonstrate valid, at that point the first contention can be truly sabotaged.
At last, contention expect that 'the greater part' of the protests got of climate and neighborhood news is noteworthy. Maybe, 'most' can be credits to 10 individuals. contention likewise accept that there are no bad things to say recieved from different progrmas broadcasted by the station. These unconfirmed suspicions genuinely debilitates the trough's case.
To close, As of now, the first contention is brimming with suspicions and end referenced in the contention can't be drawn. To completely assess the contention creator needs to give proof (maybe in the best possible configuration) and afterward contention can be assessed essentially.
- A nation should require all its students to study the same curriculum before entering college 58
- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news During this time period most of the complain 49
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 353 350
No. of Characters: 1822 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.335 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.161 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.877 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.65 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.002 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 339, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...tices from the station. This contention comprises of three suspicions, which are inspected b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...y be not less when considered with past years climate and nearby news time. Maybe, th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...inistrator needs to give adequate proof so as to know assess the contention. On the off ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 469, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...is situation has merit, this contention doesnt hold any water. Besides, administra...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...wn their bussiness in this way, as they dont need promoting they may drop their agre...
^^^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...omoting they may drop their agreements. Maybe, divert isnt useful in increment of ben...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...ay drop their agreements. Maybe, divert isnt useful in increment of benefits for the...
^^^^
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Contention
... most can be credits to 10 individuals. contention likewise accept that there are no bad t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ns and end referenced in the contention cant be drawn. To completely assess the cont...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, likewise, may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 350.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34571428571 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9235497015 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525714285714 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4972526643 57.8364921388 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0952380952 119.503703932 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 23.324526521 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09523809524 5.70786347227 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226840940319 0.218282227539 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075405695706 0.0743258471296 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929984646462 0.0701772020484 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121183278165 0.128457276422 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11257853531 0.0628817314937 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.5979740519 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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