The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station :
" Over the past few years our late night programs has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news.During this time period , most of the complaints received from the viewers were concerned with our stations coverage of weather and local news.In addition local businesses that used to advertise during our late night program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us.There for in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues , we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level"
In the passage, the author identifies the recent change in time allocation of weather and local news affected as negative to customers, so he claims that the station should reset the time of weather and local news in order to prevent additional losses. Although it is hard to identify the exact reason with this limited information, the author's claim does not necessarily have to be true regarding the evidence he showed.
First, the author saw the complaints that are mostly about the time allocation. However, this complaint cannot be regarded as general reviews from the viewers. if the number of those complaints decreased with this change, then it can be comprehended that most of the viewers do not have complaint with the change in time. also, even if the viewers truly disliked the coverage after the change, the main focus of this complaint might be in the content, not the time allocation. resetting the time allocation cannot also reset the quality of the contents.
Moreover, it is not proper to assert cancellation in advertisement is due to the change in time allocation as author thought about. The company might have different reasons for cancellation, such as shortage in budget. also, there can be a case that no more advertisement is needed because its marketing is enough already.
In sum, furthur analysis is desired in order to identify the reason for current complaints and cancellation. The author's assertion is too fast to decide such reasons with this limited information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ed as general reviews from the viewers. if the number of those complaints decrease...
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Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...have complaint with the change in time. also, even if the viewers truly disliked the...
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Line 2, column 398, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...iked the coverage after the change, the main focus of this complaint might be in the conte...
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Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Resetting
...n the content, not the time allocation. resetting the time allocation cannot also reset t...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ncellation, such as shortage in budget. also, there can be a case that no more adver...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...urrent complaints and cancellation. The authors assertion is too fast to decide such re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 2260.96107784 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 248.0 441.139720559 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77644319888 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 204.123752495 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528225806452 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 705.55239521 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4154958542 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.324526521 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.70786347227 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187191372794 0.218282227539 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695163039758 0.0743258471296 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719041249601 0.0701772020484 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10291567132 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754675751162 0.0628817314937 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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