The following is a memorandum from the business manager of television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
In a memorandum, the business manager conclude that restoring the time devoted to weather and local news to its formal level will attract more viewer to the program and will not lose more advertising revenues. he gives reason that most complaints received from viewers were concerned with weather and local news and advertisers canceled their contracts with them. There are many ways to refute the idea of the business manager. some of which are as follows.
Firstly, the manager says that most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with station's coverage of weather and local news. But, he does not tell how many viewers complaint about this. if out of 10000, 20 people are complaining about this, then the idea of the manager is purely wrong. what if the viewers which are not complaining are happy with the show. If there are enough viewers complaining about the station's coverage the business manager does not tell that what is complaint about. is it to increase the coverage or decrease the decrease the weather and local news. if the complaint is to decrease the coverage, then the statement given by manager does not hold good.
Secondly, manager says that the advertisers are cancelling the contract with them due to which they are loosing them. what if the advertisers do not want you to increase the coverage of weather and local news and want to augment the quality of your national news. The lower quality could also decrease the viewers which may further affect the advertising contracts.
Finally, what if people who first used to stay late at night to watch news channel have to get up early in the morning to go their respective jobs or people have become more serious about their life and career. If this is the case then increasing the coverage of weather and local news will not increase the viewers.
The manager should answer the above raised points to convince me that increasing the weather and local news coverage will increase the viewers and the advertising contracts. The reason given by the manager are not good enough to prove the decrease in the viewership and advertising contracts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ill not lose more advertising revenues. he gives reason that most complaints recei...
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...efute the idea of the business manager. some of which are as follows. Firstly, th...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'viewers'' or 'viewer's'?
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...al news. But, he does not tell how many viewers complaint about this. if out of 10000, ...
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... how many viewers complaint about this. if out of 10000, 20 people are complaining...
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...he idea of the manager is purely wrong. what if the viewers which are not complainin...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ot complaining are happy with the show. If there are enough viewers complaining ab...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
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...re enough viewers complaining about the stations coverage the business manager does not ...
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... not tell that what is complaint about. is it to increase the coverage or decrease...
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'decrease the'.
Suggestion: decrease the
...bout. is it to increase the coverage or decrease the decrease the weather and local news. if the complain...
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...se the coverage or decrease the decrease the weather and local news. if the compl...
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...e decrease the weather and local news. if the complaint is to decrease the covera...
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...does not hold good. Secondly, manager says that the advertisers are cancelling...
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...hem due to which they are loosing them. what if the advertisers do not want you to i...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.231958762887 0.25644967241 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.188144329897 0.15541462614 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0567010309278 0.0836205057962 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0592783505155 0.0520304965353 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0360824742268 0.0272364105082 132% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10824742268 0.125424944231 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0386597938144 0.0416121511921 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42876755081 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0386597938144 0.026700313972 145% => OK
Particles: 0.00257731958763 0.001811407834 142% => OK
Determiners: 0.115979381443 0.113004496875 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0180412371134 0.0255425247493 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0257731958763 0.0127820249294 202% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2143.0 2731.13054187 78% => OK
No of words: 362.0 446.07635468 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91988950276 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.57801047555 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325966850829 0.378187486979 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270718232044 0.287650121315 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.17679558011 0.208842608468 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0883977900552 0.135150697306 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42876755081 2.79052419416 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 207.018472906 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417127071823 0.469332199767 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.5769968707 52.1807786196 82% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.039408867 90% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1111111111 23.2022227129 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8668742903 57.7814097925 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.055555556 141.986410481 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 23.2022227129 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.724660767414 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 3.58251231527 363% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.1829343155 51.9672348444 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.33636363636 1.8405768891 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515236670551 0.441005458295 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.171974889864 0.135418324435 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.136311094481 0.0829849096947 164% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.59942290638 0.58762219726 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.176294055516 0.147661913831 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241937385501 0.193483328276 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128138207225 0.0970749176394 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.459701474757 0.42659136922 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0706933977941 0.0774707102158 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.396118923269 0.312017818177 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405801182539 0.0698173142475 58% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.87684729064 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 5.36822660099 186% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 14.657635468 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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