The following is a memorandum from the office of Mayor Harrison Smith Jones."In order to relieve Briggsville’s notorious traffic congestion, Mayor Harrison Smith Jones plans to build a multi-million dollar subway system. The subway will run through the major downtown areas, a part of the town where buses serve as the only form of public transportation. For years, residents have been complaining both about inconsistent buses, and the general lack of safety while riding the buses. Additionally, the subway will be running twenty-four hours a day. Since motorists will spend less time in traffic, Mayor Harrison Smith Jones expects to see an immediate increase in worker productivity, which will improve the economy of Briggsville."
There can be multiple ways in order to relieve Briggsville’s notorious traffic congestion but what Mayor Harrison Smith Jones plans to build may not be appropriate.Firstly when you are spending muti-million dollars you should be sure that the plan poses success. you can't dump your money in something probable to happen.Proper surveys routine check on issues will be helpful to reach this conclusion whether its safe to spent this much money or a waste.
Another thing for years, residents have been complaining both about inconsistent buses, and the general lack of safety while riding the buses. This problem cannot be solved of builiding subway but by improving the infrastructure. Buses should be evenly distributed, more buses during peak hours. Lack of safety can be improved by providing separate helpline for bus services.
Additionally, there will be certain other ways to increase worker productivity, which will improve the economy of Briggsville. How spending millions will improve the economy.
The solution provided is not fail proof, so the idea should be revisited and thought again.
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- The following is a memorandum from the office of Mayor Harrison Smith Jones."In order to relieve Briggsville’s notorious traffic congestion, Mayor Harrison Smith Jones plans to build a multi-million dollar subway system. The subway will run through 33
- Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, so, while, another thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 28.8173652695 31% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 55.5748502994 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 2260.96107784 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 173.0 441.139720559 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40462427746 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 4.56307096286 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07922715646 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 204.123752495 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.728323699422 0.468620217663 155% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 705.55239521 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.8636826435 57.8364921388 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.70786347227 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153200989358 0.218282227539 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519675947368 0.0743258471296 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852194031307 0.0701772020484 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735614115216 0.128457276422 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805376674623 0.0628817314937 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.5979740519 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.