the author proses that, Dicod crop who found that mental health and mental illness are the main reasons for the employees sick days. but when same issues occured in Tobor Technologies they had a remedy of hiring a pychologist and having free counciling sessions with the employees. However, when we look close into the given argument, is ts insufficient to coroborate the notion.
initially, the author mentions that 15% of the employees sick leaves are due to mental illness. but the author has not provided any proof to support the argument stated. mental illness caused to the employees might be due to the work pressure and inspite of worl load, hiring a pychologist does not seem to be a good idea. the author must have provided sufficient proofs to support the argument.
secondly, the author mentions about the decrease in number of sick days when a insurance plan and a psycologist are introduced to the company. we cannot say exactly that, the number of sick leaves are reduced due to introducing those plans because it depends on the employess workload or employees family issues. for example, 1 year ago when the pychologist was not hired, a particular employee might had family problms which might caused him mental illness. so the author must have explored all the variables regarding the argument to support the statement.
thirdly, the author did not mention when was the plan introduced in tobot Technologies. Because, as the time changes, the mental illness cannot be treated by even a pychologist. introducing the same plan in other company might not give the same result because it utterly depends on the type of employess and also depends on the superior. the argument stated by the author does not seem to be logical and comparing two companies with the same plan is not resonable.
lastly, the hypothesis stated by the author is insufficient to support and there are many questions need to be answered to coroborate the statement. the author must have provided proofs instead of assuming them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the author proses that, Dicod crop who foun...
^^^
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...in reasons for the employees sick days. but when same issues occured in Tobor Techn...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Initially
...sufficient to coroborate the notion. initially, the author mentions that 15% of the em...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... sick leaves are due to mental illness. but the author has not provided any proof t...
^^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mental
...y proof to support the argument stated. mental illness caused to the employees might b...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...logist does not seem to be a good idea. the author must have provided sufficient pr...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ient proofs to support the argument. secondly, the author mentions about the decrease...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he decrease in number of sick days when a insurance plan and a psycologist are in...
^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...cologist are introduced to the company. we cannot say exactly that, the number of ...
^^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ss workload or employees family issues. for example, 1 year ago when the pychologis...
^^^
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ago when the pychologist was not hired, a particular employee might had family p...
^^
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... which might caused him mental illness. so the author must have explored all the v...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thirdly
...e argument to support the statement. thirdly, the author did not mention when was th...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Introducing
...annot be treated by even a pychologist. introducing the same plan in other company might no...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...oyess and also depends on the superior. the argument stated by the author does not ...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...with the same plan is not resonable. lastly, the hypothesis stated by the author is...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e answered to coroborate the statement. the author must have provided proofs instea...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 338.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00591715976 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63972979361 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488165680473 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.661041932 57.8364921388 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.70786347227 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177404560564 0.218282227539 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601345116231 0.0743258471296 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701928752527 0.0701772020484 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101764183052 0.128457276422 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654928090021 0.0628817314937 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the author proses that, Dicod crop who foun...
^^^
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...in reasons for the employees sick days. but when same issues occured in Tobor Techn...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Initially
...sufficient to coroborate the notion. initially, the author mentions that 15% of the em...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... sick leaves are due to mental illness. but the author has not provided any proof t...
^^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mental
...y proof to support the argument stated. mental illness caused to the employees might b...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...logist does not seem to be a good idea. the author must have provided sufficient pr...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...ient proofs to support the argument. secondly, the author mentions about the decrease...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he decrease in number of sick days when a insurance plan and a psycologist are in...
^
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...cologist are introduced to the company. we cannot say exactly that, the number of ...
^^
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ss workload or employees family issues. for example, 1 year ago when the pychologis...
^^^
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ago when the pychologist was not hired, a particular employee might had family p...
^^
Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
... which might caused him mental illness. so the author must have explored all the v...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thirdly
...e argument to support the statement. thirdly, the author did not mention when was th...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Introducing
...annot be treated by even a pychologist. introducing the same plan in other company might no...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...oyess and also depends on the superior. the argument stated by the author does not ...
^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...with the same plan is not resonable. lastly, the hypothesis stated by the author is...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e answered to coroborate the statement. the author must have provided proofs instea...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 28.8173652695 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 338.0 441.139720559 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00591715976 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63972979361 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488165680473 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.661041932 57.8364921388 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5294117647 119.503703932 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.70786347227 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177404560564 0.218282227539 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601345116231 0.0743258471296 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701928752527 0.0701772020484 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101764183052 0.128457276422 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654928090021 0.0628817314937 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.