The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year. fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising,"
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The reasons mentioned by director for less sales are not clear enough to justify spending more money on advertisments. Firstly, director makes an assertion that past year, company has produced good quality movies based on data that more positive reviews were made. director uses critics rating as a proof that their movies are good and will be liked by the public. But the reasons or metrics on the basis of which critics gave a good rating may or may not be relatable to the public. Critics may rate a movie on sophisticated metrics and checks which public is not aware of or is irrelevant to.
Secondly, other external factors such as affordability of buying movie tickets maybe the reason why less people attended the movies. Regarding the recommendation made by the director , what is the proof that people will watch movies more after maybe critic rating is not a selling point at all
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Comments
e-rater score report
No. of Words: 153 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5
Minimum four paragraphs wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 153 350
No. of Characters: 725 1500
No. of Different Words: 91 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.517 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.739 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.486 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 19 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.995 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.475 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.618 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.115 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Director
...a that more positive reviews were made. director uses critics rating as a proof that the...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...c is not aware of or is irrelevant to. Secondly, other external factors such as...
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Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ying movie tickets maybe the reason why less people attended the movies. Regarding t...
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Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the recommendation made by the director , what is the proof that people will watc...
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Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that people will watch movies more after maybe critic rating is not a selling poi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 28.8173652695 17% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 55.5748502994 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 2260.96107784 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 441.139720559 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83006535948 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.56307096286 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54191544321 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 204.123752495 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.468620217663 131% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 705.55239521 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.7659777788 57.8364921388 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.70786347227 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 5.15768463074 39% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126434637171 0.218282227539 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625629015945 0.0743258471296 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04245464958 0.0701772020484 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102811717558 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00310403749928 0.0628817314937 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.5979740519 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 98.500998004 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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