The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
In today's internet generation everything is available on your lap.The movies are leaked online before the release date of movie.Therefore public are not much enthusiast about the upcoming movie.The report might me considering a small number of test cases i.e having a small data of only of a particular region.The report by marketing department lacks data based on worldwide reviews.
They siad that the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough to their prospective viewers.In 21st century -technology era where even when a Taimu ali khan pandiculates the whole world knows about it through many social sites such as Facebook,Instagram,whatsapp etc.So considering that their reviews have not reached out to the viewers is next to impossible.Today even the rural areas people get to know which movie is about to release.
They are also stating taht last year the percentage of positive reviews by the movie reviewers about specific super Screen movies increased.They are not taking into consideration the number of positive reviews which have increased over past years.Even with seven out of ten,of the reviewers have given positive reviews about the movie,its 70% positive reviews.They should consider plethora of reviews.Which would enable them to give accurate reviews.
It might be not be the public lack of awareness its the bad content or lascivious content which public are eschewing.The genre which they are producing are not liked by the public,its not suiting their taste buds.The movie might be lacking stardom of great actors or actress like Salman Khan or Aamir Khan etc.The movies are having noob actors or actresses which public do not like to watch.
Therefore according to my consideration even if the Super Screen allocates greater share of its budget towards advertising,it may debackle.They should examine carefully and work on diffrent area not on advertising.
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- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company."According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any 23
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Sentence: Therefore according to my consideration even if the Super Screen allocates greater share of its budget towards advertising,it may debackle.They should examine carefully and work on diffrent area not on advertising.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 319 350
No. of Characters: 1561 1500
No. of Different Words: 181 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.893 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.471 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 63.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.816 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.504 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 1 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 297.0 441.139720559 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40404040404 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13746905847 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.468620217663 130% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.96107784431 181% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.8473053892 258% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4199040037 57.8364921388 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 321.0 119.503703932 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.4 23.324526521 255% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.6 5.70786347227 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.25449101796 514% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100091505967 0.218282227539 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554302652495 0.0743258471296 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0203176168049 0.0701772020484 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554302652495 0.128457276422 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203176168049 0.0628817314937 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 14.3799401198 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 48.3550499002 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 12.197005988 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 12.5979740519 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.24 8.32208582834 135% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 98.500998004 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 12.3882235529 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 11.1389221557 230% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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