The following was written as part of a study weighing the benefits of a new construction project in the city of Winterville.
Car racing is extremely popular in the city of Winterville: over 20,000 Winterville residents attended the state’s annual 500-lap race last summer, and the highest-rated television program in Winterville is “Race Talk,” which is broadcast every night. Also, many successful race-car drivers live in Winterville. However, the nearest racetrack is over 150 miles away from Winterville. Given the popularity of car racing in Winterville, and a recent report indicating that the average race fan spends close to $500 per year attending car races, a new racetrack in Winterville would be very profitable.
From the study presented above, people living in Winterville seemingly appear to enjoy the sport of car racing to a greater degree. And from this study it is being apparently concluded that the new construction project of creating a race track in the city of winteville is beneficial for the city and its people.
Although we are presented with seemingly credible facts, there still are certain questions which need to be answered to reach to a proper, wise conclusion.
We need to know the total population of the city Winterville, to understand the proper ratio of people who actually attended the state's annual 500-lap race last summer.
There's a requirement of a survey conducted amongst the population, wherein they are asked about their opinion to have a new race-track in the city. This survey will actually help to understand the mood of the majority of the population about the idea of the racetrack construction project.
It is needed to know whether the construction of a new racetrack has a proper site for construction. It should not hinder with the living population and their accommodation.
Are the successful car drivers living in the city of winterville still a part of the races or are they retired. There can be a probability that they have chosen Winterville as a viable place for retirement. Thus knowing their working status might be helpful.
Hence, I believe answering the above raised, if answered with credibility and proper survey will make it feasible to reach to a conclusion on constructing a racetrack in the city.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 259 350
No. of Characters: 1265 1500
No. of Different Words: 135 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.012 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.884 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.856 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.583 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.994 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.359 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.359 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...tates annual 500-lap race last summer. Theres a requirement of a survey conducted amo...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, apparently, hence, if, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 2260.96107784 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 441.139720559 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99613899614 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92661036445 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 204.123752495 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525096525097 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2729403225 57.8364921388 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.833333333 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.70786347227 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238536741262 0.218282227539 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851044033283 0.0743258471296 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835915713704 0.0701772020484 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103290570628 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890717135544 0.0628817314937 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 98.500998004 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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