All cities should devote at least five percent of their budgets to programs that preserve and protect existing parks.
It is amenable to spent 5% of a city's budget on the programs that preserve and protect existing parks considering the fact that the parks are operational and running and are helpful in beautifying and cherishing the moods of the residents and the atmosphere of the city.
Parks are generally, public places created for the public for their enjoyment and for the beautification of the city as well. Having an aesthetic, trendy park which attracts people is a boon for the city as well, as it allows the city to be a point for tourists to hangout in. Which is again in effect beneficial for the city's economy, as having a succesfully running park gives rise to a number of local vendors and shops in general, thus creating income generating oppotunity for them.
What attracts people and tourists to a park are the opportunities to have a quality time at that place. The city administration should conduct a survey of the moods of the visitors which come to the city's exisitng parks, the survey should be conducted on happiness quotient of the visitors.There should also be a survey to assess the environmental benefits which the parks provide, opportunities for the local vendors that arise because of the park.
After analysing the survey the city administration should work on the data they have gathered for the betterment and proper functioning of the extisiting parks. They should increases the greenery and options for amusement activities. The parks should be enjoyable for every age group.
The exisitng parks should be upgraded with equipments and points of attraction so that the parks become more up to date and enjoyable.Hence, it is paramount to have atleast 5% of budget devoted for the maintenace and betterment of the existing parks.
Hence, I believe with certainty that devoting a modicum amount of atleast 5 percent of the budgets to the preservation and protection of the existing parks is wise and beneficial for the city and its people, thus enhancing the beauty,atmosphere and economy of the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, thus, well, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97935103245 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96286510427 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463126843658 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.5129151769 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.454545455 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8181818182 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299893198396 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125657800899 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759639132653 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179560653257 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688267778452 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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