An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
An international development organization, has engineered a new breed of millet high in Vitamin A in order to deal with its deficiency in nation of Tagus. There are several questions which should have answered in order to evaluate recommendation. Depending about answers of those questions it can be decided that it i=either strenghen or weaken the recommendation.
Genetically engineered plant are growing very quickly all over the world as mentioned in the passage it has been said that new breed of millet is high in vitamin A so it will help to fight against the deficiency of Vitamin A bu it is important to consider how much high amount of vitamin A is present in new breed as compared to old breed of millet. when some plants are genetically modified its some changes in other undesired characteristics may produce any negative results.So it is really important to do study to ensure their are such negative effects present in newly developed breed.
Before any solution for fight against Vitamin A deficiency it is necessary to do research about other easier alternatives available for the same which might give better results than genetically modified millet.
As newly developed seed of millet are costly, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming it. Difference in subsides new seed price and old seed price should be made more lucid. It will help farmer to make their decision about farming of new variety. It might happen that if this difference is large it might happen that farmer will not grow new variety even when it is being given at subsidies price. Even the profit gained by farmers after cultivating new variety depends upon certain factors like its demand in market, market prize, total output. It is essential to elaborate about this factors in the prospective of farmer.
Even thought millet is staple food in Tagus, acceptance of new breed by citizens of the nation depends on the characteristics and change in properties of millet after it has been modified genetically. It might happen that people will not accept the new variety because it is showing certain characters like different taste than prior one, increased cooking time,etc. It might cause allergies and spread of other severe disease if accepted in use without complete prior results.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 381 350
No. of Characters: 1871 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.418 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.911 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.708 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.214 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.428 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.214 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.339 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.602 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...renghen or weaken the recommendation. Genetically engineered plant are growing...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...eed as compared to old breed of millet. when some plants are genetically modified it...
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Line 5, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...eed as compared to old breed of millet. when some plants are genetically modified it...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...en some plants are genetically modified its some changes in other undesired charact...
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Line 5, column 478, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...istics may produce any negative results.So it is really important to do study to e...
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Line 5, column 526, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... really important to do study to ensure their are such negative effects present in ne...
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Line 13, column 585, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...put. It is essential to elaborate about this factors in the prospective of farmer. ...
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Line 17, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e food in Tagus, acceptance of new breed by citizens of the nation depends on the...
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Line 17, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...e than prior one, increased cooking time,etc. It might cause allergies and spread of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 378.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07407407407 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77362753703 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513227513228 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8394276626 57.8364921388 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.866666667 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 23.324526521 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 5.70786347227 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425361717324 0.218282227539 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135016061011 0.0743258471296 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13045506393 0.0701772020484 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210922990466 0.128457276422 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595258871578 0.0628817314937 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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