Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
Space flight which carry human beings are always seen as risky. Most of the people are scared of the manned missions in the outerspace. There are many potential threats which are have a high chance of killing astronauts in space. Eventhough, these taking people to outer space is always dangerous most of the space research organizations does not come forward to start this mission because it includes huge amount of money. Preparing the people for outer space, the technicians and the survival equipment for humans in outer space are also considered high price. Whereas, success story of space missions which are unmanned and included with less risks and cost are decreasing the chances of any manned flights in the coming days. But when it comes to increasing citizens interest in aeronautics in the future manned space missions are crucial because, individuals are thrilled and interested in seeing astrounauts in space rather than a Ai robot are anti gravity space rover. The chance of creating next generation aeronautics engineers is high when we include people in outer space missions. But, keeping in mind the diadvantages of sending people to space, which are high when compared to the advantages.
Thus, there are significantly less people astronauts who are sent to space for research purposes.
Governments around the globe invest in space research organizations such as nasa and isro. The success of the organizations are always looked upon when it comes to understanding their impact and worth. Scientists are also worried about their research and the gradual increase in the price when it comes to sending individuals into space shuttles and excetera. There are many threats and dangers which are mostly unknown to us when sending a living organism. For instance, laika a dog which is sent by the ussr into outer space is given poison to die slowly and painlessly when it is space instead, it died of the humidity suffering for hours without anyone around her to help. We never know what dangers are out there in the space as we are just a tiny part of it. So, most of the researchers keeping in mind the potential risks and huge costs try to avoid manned missions to space. On the other hand, unmanned missions are succesful and possess less problems to the government and non government organizations such as less amount of money used on the mission and more success rate such as gathering information through pictures from gadgets which are used in the mission. artificial intelligence is huge responsible to the success rate these days because, most of the researchers are using artificial intelligence gadgets to gather more information from the outer space. So, I think
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e-rater score report
Out of topics. This is an argument essay not an issue essay.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 447 350
No. of Characters: 2210 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.598 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.944 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.636 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 148 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.526 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.271 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.409 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.135 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 2 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Space flight which carry human beings are always seen...
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Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ys seen as risky. Most of the people are scared of the manned missions in the out...
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Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...re are many potential threats which are have a high chance of killing astronauts in ...
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Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me forward to start this mission because it includes huge amount of money. Prepar...
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Line 1, column 630, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of space missions which are unmanned and included with less risks and cost are de...
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Line 1, column 646, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun risks is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s which are unmanned and included with less risks and cost are decreasing the chanc...
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Line 1, column 940, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...seeing astrounauts in space rather than a Ai robot are anti gravity space rover....
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Line 1, column 941, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eeing astrounauts in space rather than a Ai robot are anti gravity space rover. T...
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Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ared to the advantages. Thus, there are significantly less people astronauts who...
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Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ntages. Thus, there are significantly less people astronauts who are sent to space...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... sent to space for research purposes. Governments around the globe invest in s...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...g a living organism. For instance, laika a dog which is sent by the ussr into out...
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Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... space is given poison to die slowly and painlessly when it is space instead, it ...
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Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...died of the humidity suffering for hours without anyone around her to help. We ne...
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Line 3, column 952, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nned missions are succesful and possess less problems to the government and non gove...
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Line 3, column 1179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Artificial
... gadgets which are used in the mission. artificial intelligence is huge responsible to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, thus, whereas, for instance, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.9520958084 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2246.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 447.0 441.139720559 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02460850112 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67011398273 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 204.123752495 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463087248322 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 705.55239521 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1293429576 57.8364921388 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.35 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 5.70786347227 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259196745222 0.218282227539 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855679976174 0.0743258471296 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053769346283 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164024916327 0.128457276422 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765320350004 0.0628817314937 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 98.500998004 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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