Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Inoculations or vaccinations have become an integral part of human life. We are inoculated against different kinds of diseases right from childhood. This is however more of a wishful statement than an actual reality. Today a large portion of people have decided otherwise and therefore are part of what is called the Anti-Vaxxers diaspora. The argument presented by them is questioning not the efficacy of a vaccine but the concept of it. Almost entirety of vaccines work on the concept of administering a weakened or dead strain of the same germ that is creating the havoc so as to build immunity against it.
If this is read right now, it would understandably create an image of baseless fear. It is not that vaccines don't come with side-effects, they do, however that being minimalistic we have to take the chance, for better or worse. It is also known that Medical Councils such as FDA, WHO, CDC etc would have to approve these, which is done only after three phases of trials. The last of which involving substantial number of people over a stipulated time, to see what harmful effect it can cause. The possibility of death as a result of administering the vaccine routinely is tiny. It is an outlier and not the norm.
Sufficient data reflecting such conclusion in forms of evidence has to be presented. Data that explicably shows how if not administering these inoculations could result in a far worse scenario. This would weaken the argument and move towards the idea of administering them. There has to be not just correlation between inoculations and death but clear establishment of causation. It should legitimately deduce a cause and effect relationship and should not solely be based on observed association. That case strengthen the argument provided. After careful analysis of all perspectives and opinions from experts, with not just anecdotal evidences, but with research, the argument would be better explained.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 321 350
No. of Characters: 1579 1500
No. of Different Words: 190 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.233 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.919 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.941 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.895 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.48 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.267 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.417 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es right from childhood. This is however more of a wishful statement than an actu...
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Line 1, column 576, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...he same germ that is creating the havoc so as to build immunity against it. If this ...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... baseless fear. It is not that vaccines dont come with side-effects, they do, howeve...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'strengthens'.
Suggestion: strengthens
...ased on observed association. That case strengthen the argument provided. After careful an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 320.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.053125 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98367792906 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 204.123752495 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.468620217663 124% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 705.55239521 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2336217657 57.8364921388 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1052631579 119.503703932 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78947368421 5.70786347227 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16987975887 0.218282227539 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494452768651 0.0743258471296 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526507907858 0.0701772020484 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107851378407 0.128457276422 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158283657026 0.0628817314937 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.3799401198 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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