“Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculation against cow flu to be routinely administered.”
The theme of the discussion revolves around a disease born out of a domestic specie-cow. The author claims that many lives could be saved if the inoculations are routinely administered.However, the number of deaths are considerably low and hence, they don't administer<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="perform "></span> as often. while I think author makes a good point, on close scrutiny it can be observed that lives are more important than any expenses spent on the cure. As they say - 'Better safe than sorry'. hence, I disagree with author's stance. To substantiate my argument, I present the following scenarios.
author claims that routinely administration of cow flu cannot be permitted but does not offer a reason for the same. if the step back is because of resource constraints, then proper management should be done to allocate fair share for cow flu. lives are more precious than any expense.
Numerous vaccinations such as the polio are a one-time vaccination. if a chemical can be introduced inside a human's body which will immune them for rest of their lives, it can avoid the hassle of any routinely administration.
author also claims that the death due to cow flu are very few. There is a high possibility that the reason of deaths aren't properly noted and the stats provided to the author aren't completely reliable. people might confuse cow flu with some other common disease. hence, if a routinely administration is done it will not only immune the people against cow flu, it will also increase the awareness amongst people regarding the condition.
while author seems to make a logical conclusion in the scenario, on close insight it was observed that author's decision based on limited information isn't necessarily good for the population. hence, a thorough analysis must be done before limiting the rutinely administration.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 307 350
No. of Characters: 1503 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.186 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.896 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.855 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 34.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.899 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.394 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.711 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.095 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...inoculations are routinely administered.However, the number of deaths are considerably ...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hs are considerably low and hence, they dont administer ^^^^
Line 1, column 352, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...='perform '> as often. while I think author makes a good point, on c...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 396, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'scrutiny'.
Suggestion: scrutiny
...e I think author makes a good point, on close scrutiny it can be observed that lives are more ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 497, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt than any expenses spent on the cure. As they say - Better safe than sorry. henc...
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Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
.... As they say - Better safe than sorry. hence, I disagree with authors stance. To sub...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Author
...I present the following scenarios. author claims that routinely administration of...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...t does not offer a reason for the same. if the step back is because of resource co...
^^
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lives
...one to allocate fair share for cow flu. lives are more precious than any expense. ...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...s the polio are a one-time vaccination. if a chemical can be introduced inside a h...
^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Author
...sle of any routinely administration. author also claims that the death due to cow f...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 118, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...h possibility that the reason of deaths arent properly noted and the stats provided t...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...ed and the stats provided to the author arent completely reliable. people might confu...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 203, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...o the author arent completely reliable. people might confuse cow flu with some other c...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...cow flu with some other common disease. hence, if a routinely administration is done ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 274, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('routinely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('administration') instead of another adjective.
...th some other common disease. hence, if a routinely administration is done it will not only immune the peo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ngst people regarding the condition. while author seems to make a logical conclusi...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...s decision based on limited information isnt necessarily good for the population. he...
^^^^
Line 10, column 192, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...nt necessarily good for the population. hence, a thorough analysis must be done befor...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 55.5748502994 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 299.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28762541806 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54617007802 2.78398813304 127% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 204.123752495 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 705.55239521 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.7512940042 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5882352941 23.324526521 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2330775623 0.218282227539 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623357911791 0.0743258471296 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642200280648 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112559716087 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668088823571 0.0628817314937 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32208582834 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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