"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. I disagree with the statement. The below points will substantiate my opinions about the same.
Large corporations, be it fast food joints such as MC Donald's, dominos or large software service based companies such as infosys, accenture, the main aim is to make profit. This profit is mostly used by the corporation for the welfare of their own employees and thereby for the welfare of the nation.
Corporations, creates a lot of employment opportunities for the welfare of the nation. As the desire to make larger profit kicks in, the requirement of the man power hikes as well. This improves the employment rate of the nation, thereby affecting the GDP for the betterment of the nation.
While the corporations aim at maximizing profits, in today's competitive world there can be 10 other organization performing better. This induces a sense of confidence and therefore, helps the nation with the availability of better quality stuff.
Few might contradict quoting the corporations might compromise with the quality to earn profit, a healthy competition will always ensure the standards.
Most of the corporations are large and successful because they work for the betterment of the nation. Take the example of Tesla. It is considered as the fastest growing company in the United states of America. Elon Musk, a talented thinker genuinely wants to solve the problem of pollution and global warming and hence, he is a success. Hence, a nation can always differentiate the good from the bad and help only those organizations make profit which are making the nation better.
While some might say that the profit maximizing strategy of the corporations might have a selfish motive, indirectly or directly these large organization ends up being a boon for the nation by creating a better economic environment and providing quality service to the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little might'.
Suggestion: Little might
... availability of better quality stuff. Few might contradict quoting the corporations mig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19749216301 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90590707841 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.6110441845 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5294117647 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254624098479 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961842042632 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112704706458 0.0758088955206 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13957578931 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113507291784 0.0667264976115 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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