"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The argument claims that business in Central Plaza has decreased steadily in past two years due to increased number of skateboarding practitioners. Stereo-typically, this argument might insightful, however, there are many assumptions and unwanted questions before recommending whether skateboarders should be banned.
First of all, the author has compared the number of skateboarders over a period of two years without providing the answer to the question "what else has changed in the past two years that could have resulted in the decrease in market?". There could have been a downfall in economy, a decrease in population of the area or an opening of new mall in its vicinity. In short, there are many others factors that could have affected the market
Secondly, the author holds skateboarders responsible for littering and vandalism when there are other critical subjects that could have affected the Plaza's environment. Such subjects may include that how has plaza management changed in past two years. Hence, skateboarders cannot be blamed without questioning plaza's managment.
In conclusion, it might be a biased and ignorant judgment to ban skateboarders from the place and the problem might not be resolved by doing so. Hence, the argument is missing answer to important questions before inferring the conclusion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in short, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 55.5748502994 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 2260.96107784 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 441.139720559 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52427184466 5.12650576532 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12930258051 2.78398813304 112% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 204.123752495 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572815533981 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 705.55239521 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6483488829 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.444444444 119.503703932 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.70786347227 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266214122866 0.218282227539 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117339522981 0.0743258471296 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13493004825 0.0701772020484 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156275983779 0.128457276422 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105999257518 0.0628817314937 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.3799401198 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.5979740519 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.9071856287 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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