Over the past two years th number of shopper in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased. By prohibited the skateboarding the Central plaza Business will return in the previously high level.
Over the past two years th number of shopper in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while popularity of skateboarding has increased. By prohibited the skateboarding the Central plaza Business will not return in the high level.The first thing is What was the shop was about in the central plaza? If the shops of the Central plaza was nothing but general shop without the skateboard stuff then the shoppers must keep the skateboard stuffs more and more cause skateboarding has increased dramatically.if the shopper sells the skateboard stuff the business will get profit fir sure cause they will get the stuff at near hand where the skateboard.
The central plaza has any other sporting facility? The central plaza should have other sporting facility to make user more engaged with the central plaza and the shopper should also bring the other sporting stuff and it will increase the user in the shop.The more will be opportunities the more the user will come. It will for sure increase the business in Central plaza.As, in increase the amount of litter and vandalism through the plaza the number must increase more when will be more sporting equipment.
Is any GYM in the central Plaza? The gym must include cause people who come for skateboarding can spend their time in the gym workout after the skateboarding.There can shop for gym equipment and other stuff like food's store.How is quality of the shop in the central plaza? .Quality of shop is a big issue for the customer.So the quality of the shop can increased.
Is there any better quality shop around the Central Plaza? If there is better quality shop around the Central plaza or near the Central plaza then prohibited skateboarding can result the reverse in the business.And there will a chance to decrease the business in The central Plaza if th Skateboarding prohibited cause the users were there will no longer been in the Central Plaza.If the people get decreased the business will also get decreased.So to increase the business in there the skate boarding can't closed.
- Over the past two years th number of shopper in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased. By prohibited the skateboarding the Central plaza Business will return in the previously high level. 25
- Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition. 50
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 352 350
No. of Characters: 1674 1500
No. of Different Words: 137 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.331 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.756 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.482 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 23.451 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.529 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.529 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.241 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: The
...iness will not return in the high level.The first thing is What was the shop was ab...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: The
...d it will increase the user in the shop.The more will be opportunities the more th...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d it will increase the user in the shop.The more will be opportunities the more th...
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Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l increase the user in the shop.The more will be opportunities the more the user ...
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Line 2, column 372, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... increase the business in Central plaza.As, in increase the amount of litter and v...
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Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plaza the number must increase more when will be more sporting equipment. Is any...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... the central Plaza? The gym must include cause people who come for skateboarding ...
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Suggestion: There
...the gym workout after the skateboarding.There can shop for gym equipment and other st...
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Suggestion: How
...ipment and other stuff like foods store.How is quality of the shop in the central p...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ality of the shop in the central plaza? .Quality of shop is a big issue for the c...
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Suggestion: Quality
...lity of the shop in the central plaza? .Quality of shop is a big issue for the customer...
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Suggestion: So
...of shop is a big issue for the customer.So the quality of the shop can increased....
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... customer.So the quality of the shop can increased. Is there any better quality ...
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Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: And
... can result the reverse in the business.And there will a chance to decrease the bus...
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Suggestion: If
...ill no longer been in the Central Plaza.If the people get decreased the business w...
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Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ill no longer been in the Central Plaza.If the people get decreased the business w...
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Line 4, column 445, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ed the business will also get decreased.So to increase the business in there the s...
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Line 4, column 501, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...he business in there the skate boarding cant closed.
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Line 4, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usiness in there the skate boarding cant closed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.9520958084 154% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 28.8173652695 14% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 343.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95918367347 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6935777855 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 204.123752495 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.393586005831 0.468620217663 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.122963834 57.8364921388 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.636363636 119.503703932 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1818181818 23.324526521 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.70786347227 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526375931314 0.218282227539 241% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.260973588103 0.0743258471296 351% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197734191453 0.0701772020484 282% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337624869542 0.128457276422 263% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183378981201 0.0628817314937 292% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.3799401198 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.32208582834 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 98.500998004 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.9071856287 160% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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