Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs.
The business manager is concerned about the late-night viewership and states that the channel received concerns that weather and local news were not adequately reported. Hence the business manager is proposing steps to mitigate the damage caused by devoting more time to weather and local news.
The manager states that it is a late-night show and there is no account if people prefer to sleep rather than seeing any news at all. If this is the case, there might not be any viewership for any news telecasted during that time. The channel might have to think about rescheduling the whole lot. Also, there is no information of the preference of the people, that is, even if local and weather reports are telecasted, there might be a few number of people who watch different channels anyways. This cannot be accounted for decrease in viewership.
One thought is about the quality of national news that is telecasted; some light must be thrown on this since even a very interesting stack of national news might interest the most uninterested lot. How well this news channel presents the national news is a question to ponder. Any advertising company would not want to associate themselves with sub-standard quality and this might be the sole cause of many advertising companies retracing their contracts.
One scenario is that only a few sect of people might be unhappy with the sudden change in the program list and others might still be interested to view national news. Details like total viewership and the percentage complaining about the change could be inspected for more insight in this matter.
Overall, more information on people preference, quality of the material presented, total viewership and percentage complaining can be taken into consideration before trying to mitigate the situation.
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- Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ocal news were not adequately reported. Hence the business manager is proposing steps...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: WHOLE_LOT[1]
Message: Use simply 'lot'.
Suggestion: lot
...ht have to think about rescheduling the whole lot. Also, there is no information of the p...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...eports are telecasted, there might be a few number of people who watch different channels ...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sect seems to be countable; consider using: 'few sects'.
Suggestion: few sects
...ntracts. One scenario is that only a few sect of people might be unhappy with the sud...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'anyway', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251572327044 0.25644967241 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.172955974843 0.15541462614 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0817610062893 0.0836205057962 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0440251572327 0.0520304965353 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00943396226415 0.0272364105082 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116352201258 0.125424944231 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0534591194969 0.0416121511921 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72995238896 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0251572327044 0.026700313972 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132075471698 0.113004496875 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0377358490566 0.0255425247493 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00943396226415 0.0127820249294 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1808.0 2731.13054187 66% => OK
No of words: 295.0 446.07635468 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12881355932 6.12365571057 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.57801047555 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352542372881 0.378187486979 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281355932203 0.287650121315 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203389830508 0.208842608468 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135593220339 0.135150697306 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72995238896 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 207.018472906 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518644067797 0.469332199767 111% => OK
Word variations: 52.0527179761 52.1807786196 100% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.039408867 65% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6923076923 23.2022227129 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0233081768 57.7814097925 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.076923077 141.986410481 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 23.2022227129 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.724660767414 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.58251231527 112% => OK
Readability: 50.8279009126 51.9672348444 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.86111111111 1.8405768891 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386458326531 0.441005458295 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147170940273 0.135418324435 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0915543995771 0.0829849096947 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.642051865652 0.58762219726 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194244832704 0.147661913831 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178326499497 0.193483328276 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779374542995 0.0970749176394 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.364160610249 0.42659136922 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.041063485009 0.0774707102158 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258507871251 0.312017818177 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812965936652 0.0698173142475 116% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 5.36822660099 112% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 14.657635468 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.