"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument given is having many fallacies one can prove it.As there is no proper statestics,numbers,percentiles maintioned for the conclusion.They should have given more proper statements to finalize the decision.
Fisrt of all they said "late-night news" this lesser the number of viewers.As compared to day time viewers late night will definitely in lesser amount.So review count of argument will automatically drop.It might have happened that people satrted sleeping early while some were complaing about the station coverage.All these information is not provided.
Another one is that about local businesses that used to advertise late night would have though to cut done their spendings on late night ads as small number of people watch them.They might have thought to invest that bugs in someother way of advertisment.
However, its not the correct decision to restore the time dedicated to weather and local news.News channels can find out way so they can cover all local news within time spam.Or may be just they have missed important news from local station which should have been covered..because of this people might found that news are missing. So they need to focus on which news is more important over another.
So considering above points there are many loopholes in the argument. Final decision should not be taken on given statement, as they required more absulate review and study before made the final decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... having many fallacies one can prove it.As there is no proper statestics,numbers,p...
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...apos; this lesser the number of viewers.As compared to day time viewers late night...
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...apos; this lesser the number of viewers.As compared to day time viewers late night...
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...re complaing about the station coverage.All these information is not provided. Ano...
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...ime dedicated to weather and local news.News channels can find out way so they can c...
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...n cover all local news within time spam.Or may be just they have missed important ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 55.5748502994 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 225.0 441.139720559 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41333333333 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25841739969 2.78398813304 117% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 204.123752495 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604444444444 0.468620217663 129% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 705.55239521 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.8473053892 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.8502377929 57.8364921388 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 243.6 119.503703932 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.0 23.324526521 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.70786347227 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205823761433 0.218282227539 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973366516854 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979864467019 0.0701772020484 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973366516854 0.128457276422 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979864467019 0.0628817314937 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 14.3799401198 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 48.3550499002 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.197005988 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.5979740519 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32208582834 117% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 12.3882235529 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.1389221557 180% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.9071856287 168% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.