To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
To know the thinking and quality of society ,its important to know the people from its major cities as most of the population lives there. Its easy to understand how the society is ,how they live, behave by judging the people and living environment from its popular cities.
Now a days because of opportunities of money making ,most of the young generation migrate from their hometown to big cities .they do jobs there and become part of that city and get involve in the culture of that city .most of the people follow the fashion or blooming style from these big cities.
Also student prefer to study in these cities because of fame of cities and future chances for jobs which these cities having.so these students automatically grasp that culture and support that culture ,so if one want to study about people its very important to study these big cities where most of the young generation lives.
Even though we need to study town and ruler area for understanding society but there population is very less as compared to these cities,due to large number of people in the big cities one can study culture of living , markets ,which food people eat the most,what time they weak up and sleep ,how they spend their day .All this above mentioned points can be studied by examining these big cities.
Thus it can be concluded that it is important to take that base where most of the population lives.This will generate more effective and more trustable result as compared to study whole region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76538461538 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33799997638 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530769230769 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0601669021 60.3974514979 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 206.5 118.986275619 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.3333333333 23.4991977007 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253804495471 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13981469652 0.0831039109588 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438405192937 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142193506001 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535279332239 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.