Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They believe it has many health-promoting nutrients, such as cartilage, which can heal our joints, and chondroitin, which promotes nerve regeneration. Skeptics point out that ingested cartilage can’t replenish cartilage in your knees or elbows and ingested chondroitin doesn’t make our brains any healthier. Yet, there is strong anecdotal evidence that people who consume bone broth have fewer metabolic and inflammatory diseases than those who don’t. Therefore, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses.
While the author made a cogent argument about Paleo diets, in which they follow the diet of early ancestors. But their are many fallws in the given arguemnt.
Firstly, our early ancestors had such a diet where theu drink bone broth, but on a contrary for capturing food they needed to hunt, induling ardlous work. The daily hunting and exercise also plays a role in how fit is ones body.
Secondly, Our ancessotir dosent have means of culnery tools. If they have had that its passible they also wont eat food in such a manner.
Thirdly, the drinking of broth to increase cardilage among bone, as shown in bioogy our body is always regenerating havung given resources. Its not like earing brain will give more advancement to cerebal activites. its the neutrient taken. it can be in paleo diets or any modern diets its the same.
In conclusion, Ancient humans, our ancestors, knew someting about our physiology and they tried to comensurate that with food like bone broth, but in present era, we have resources and techniques that can bring same amount of neutrient with out following such a diet.
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e-rater score report
No. of Words: 190 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 190 350
No. of Characters: 879 1500
No. of Different Words: 125 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.713 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.626 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.308 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 50 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.45 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.889 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.376 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.731 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.044 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.6327345309 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 55.5748502994 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 2260.96107784 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 441.139720559 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83157894737 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.56307096286 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40599436081 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 204.123752495 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673684210526 0.468620217663 144% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 705.55239521 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.7949084828 57.8364921388 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4545454545 119.503703932 70% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 5.70786347227 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821653427983 0.0743258471296 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675485334346 0.0701772020484 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134080455812 0.128457276422 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032067067389 0.0628817314937 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.3799401198 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.5979740519 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 98.500998004 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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