Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They believe it has many health-promoting nutrients, such as cartilage, which can heal our joints, and chondroitin, which promotes nerve regeneration. Skeptics point out that ingested cartilage can’t replenish cartilage in your knees or elbows and ingested chondroitin doesn’t make our brains any healthier. Yet, there is strong anecdotal evidence that people who consume bone broth have fewer metabolic and inflammatory diseases than those who don’t. Therefore, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument avers that our ancestors were way ahead of us in physiology as they implemeted Paleo diets in their era itself. The arguments claims that there are huge benefits when one consumes Paleo diet as it increases our metabolic rate and helps cure most of the chronic diseases. Although the argument mentions a lot of positive things on the Paleo diet but it does forget to pejorate few assumptions on which it is dependent.
One such assumption is the comparision of us with hominids. The era in which eating animals i.e. nonetheless the Paleo diet was followed was way earlier than what we are in the present. Starting with the culture and values, and going to the globalization and scaling, we -- the humans have drastically changed. Our ancestors were more into labor( redundant physical work) and we are inclined now on 'work from home'. The body changes of the present and the past are prominent and if we get on Paleo diet, it is unsure that we would be having the same results. A comparative analysis of our bodies with the ancestors should be done as the argument depends on the similarity of both the generations.
Even if we have similar body to that of our ancestors, the argument forgets to view the quality of life. The argument assumes that nutrients we get from animals is the same as the earlier generations. In our era, animals have become a profit making business and with that said the animals liken hen are fested with injections and drugs that make them produce eggs at a higher scale which reduces their metabolism makes them weak and are highly intoxicated with hormonal imbalances. When these animals are percieved by humans, the diseases get passed on to them. Likewise, how in the argument the nutrients our passed, here the illnesses get inside our body. In such scenarios, the assumption that animals are stronger and maintained like how they were in olden days does not hold water.
The argument that Paleo diets improves metabolism and cures chronic illnesses stays flawed. A systematic research and comparision studied should be presented in order to consider the argument as true. If there is proper answer to the assumptions above then we can implement Paleo diet in our day to day lifecycle for much benefits.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 386 350
No. of Characters: 1828 1500
No. of Different Words: 194 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.432 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.736 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.527 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.925 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.328 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.328 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.177 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'claim'.
Suggestion: claim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, nonetheless, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 28.8173652695 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 2260.96107784 83% => OK
No of words: 384.0 441.139720559 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86197916667 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70322608563 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 204.123752495 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1879476994 57.8364921388 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.722222222 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.70786347227 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19198315832 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624470985707 0.0743258471296 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334430158751 0.0701772020484 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120572651688 0.128457276422 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300668323632 0.0628817314937 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.3799401198 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32208582834 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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