Pirouettes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child. Of all the dance schools in Elmtown, Pirouettes has the most intensive program, and our teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Many of our students have gone on to become professional dancers with top dance companies
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The author states that Pirouttes Ballet School is the clear choice for any child, because of several reasons, such as their intensive program, the fact that their teachers have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies,and the success of its students. Although the argument may be convincing, there are still certain questions that need to be answered to make it more cogent.
It is stated that the Ballet has the most "intensive" program. With what other schools is their program being compared to? Only if sufficient knowledge of such schools is provided, inferences can be made about how intensive the program is. The other schools might be the ones ranked lowest in terms of the quality of their program, or they might be the highly ranked ones. Knowledge of where the School stands in terms of its program's quality is an important parameter to assess the performance of the school.
The author claims that the teachers of the School have danced in the most prestigious ballet companies all over the world. Although it does shed light on the experience of the teachers in Ballet, how can it be inferred that these teachers would be able to impart their knowledge to the students effectively? It is not necessary that a good performer is a good teacher as well. Having danced in prestigious companies is not indicative of their teaching capabilites. Thus, the capability of the teachers to impart the knowledge that they have gained is more important than just the knowledge that they possess.
Following the claim about the teachers, the author states that many of the School's students are professional dancers with top dance companies. But, since the School's primary aim is to teach Ballet, have all the students become professional Ballet dancers with top dance companies that specialize in Ballet? It is quite possible that a student would have mastered some other dance form other than Ballet ( after having left the Pirouettes School), and ended up as a professional in that particular form. To show that the school has been successful in molding Ballet dancers, it is necessary to project complete information about the successful students of the School.
Thus, the argument on which the recommendation for the Pirouttes Ballet school is based on, can be evaluated only when all the above mentioned question can be answered effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 2260.96107784 88% => OK
No of words: 389.0 441.139720559 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09768637532 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78757608358 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 204.123752495 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45501285347 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.471057884232 212% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3831850121 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.647058824 119.503703932 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 5.70786347227 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453204358022 0.218282227539 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157251299687 0.0743258471296 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13560652749 0.0701772020484 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24352534916 0.128457276422 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894681623673 0.0628817314937 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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