A recent sales study indicates that consumption of seafood dishes in Bay City restaurants has increased by 30 percent during the past five years. Yet there are no currently operating city restaurants whose specialty is seafood. Moreover, the majority of families in Bay City are two-income families, and a nationwide study has shown that such families eat significantly fewer home-cooked meals than they did a decade ago but at the same time express more concern about healthful eating. Therefore, the new Captain Seafood restaurant that specializes in seafood should be quite popular and profitable.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The writer has concluded that the new Captain seafood (cs) restaurant will be successful based on evidence presented. However, the discussion is rile with gaps and it is not cogent enough.
The first point made by the article is that seafood is becoming popular in Bay City (bc) since its demand in restaurants has increased by 30% in last 5 years. but before could consider this as positive indicator, we need to understand the exact root cause. In last five years people have begun liking or preferring seafood for it taste or benefits or it is because these restaurant are offering some discount packages which make them affordable option. if latter is the case, then cs management must think it on those lines as well. will they be able to match the prices and still maintain to stay above the breakeven?
The next support statement presented by the author is that most families in bc dine out but are concerned on maintaining healthy diet. At this stage we need to understand what proportion of fisher lovers are in this group since they will be target market of cs. Also, we need to understand if the all members of the families have become inclined towards seafood or just parents or teenagers and if children are left out. these details are important to determine if the entire family unit would prefer to eat at seafood specialist restaurants or would they prefer to eat at general places where each family member could order based their likes and dislikes. Additionally, we need some further details to build on what is significance of seafood in terms nutrients from perspective of an average bc citizen. if it is taken to be as healthy and important option as it?
cs could be a new good option for bc to turn to in terms of taste and health. but, before we can establish that cs will turn out be profitable business in bc, more information is required to be analyzed.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 332 350
No. of Characters: 1519 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.269 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.575 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.538 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 101 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 36.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.321 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.387 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.662 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.196 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'riled'.
Suggestion: riled
...e presented. However, the discussion is rile with gaps and it is not cogent enough. ...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...s has increased by 30% in last 5 years. but before could consider this as positive ...
^^^
Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this restaurant' or 'these restaurants'?
Suggestion: this restaurant; these restaurants
...r it taste or benefits or it is because these restaurant are offering some discount packages whi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ages which make them affordable option. if latter is the case, then cs management ...
^^
Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
...t must think it on those lines as well. will they be able to match the prices and st...
^^^^
Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...teenagers and if children are left out. these details are important to determine if t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 807, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...m perspective of an average bc citizen. if it is taken to be as healthy and import...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Cs
... healthy and important option as it? cs could be a new good option for bc to tu...
^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...o turn to in terms of taste and health. but, before we can establish that cs will t...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 332.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68072289157 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5765744052 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.468620217663 121% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5597402105 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.6 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12415229201 0.218282227539 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405636425006 0.0743258471296 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687450186673 0.0701772020484 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079185551248 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628859641991 0.0628817314937 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.5979740519 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.