As stated by the Vice president of a food distribution company, the loss in the palm city is higher compared with the loss in the wintervale. While using the service of different pests control by different company the loss is stated. Food is likely to decay sooner if not cared properly so the prime mission of the pests company is to provide the better service to store and safeguard the food from pests and other consequences. It states that the Buzzoff company is better than the fly away company without the sufficient research on the types of raw food stored, environmental and structural factor of different warehouse, and food supplied to warehouse by different company. This might not be an exhaustive research.
Switching from the Fly away company to the bezzoffs pest control company might lead to more damage without studying the service both companies are providing. The types of raw food stored in different ware house may be of different variety which might be suitable as for these companies. Also, the warehouse might be of different size and quantity might differ between the warehouse.
The pests control service might be better of the company Fly away as compared to the bezoffs while looking at the food to be stored. The food stored in different warehouse might be of different type. As the food stored in Fly-way might highly attracted to the pests and other might be less attracted to the pests. The climate condition, humidity, and temperature must be stated and studied properly to distinguish between the warehouse. The size of warehouse is not specified clearly by the vice president. The loss of food is only stated properly by the vice president. The loss in Fly Away might be only 10% from the total and loss in the warehouse wintervalve might be higher than 20% which results that fly away is better compared to the bezoffs pests control company. The quantity of the food stored warehouse must be specified and studied properly to choose the better service provider.
The environmental factor is not stated in the previous research article, which have the high anomaly in the selection of the company for the warehouse. Environmental factor along with the structural design of the warehouse must be studied to choose the better option. Studying and analysing all these parameters carefully the fly Away company might result a better choice for the palm city as compared to the bezoffs company.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 408 350
No. of Characters: 1986 1500
No. of Different Words: 142 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.494 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.868 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.546 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 149 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.474 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.684 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.263 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.398 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.398 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...od distribution company, the loss in the palm city is higher compared with the lo...
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Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mpared with the loss in the wintervale. While using the service of different pests co...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 698, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'exhaustive research'.
Suggestion: exhaustive research
...by different company. This might not be an exhaustive research. Switching from the Fly away company ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erent variety which might be suitable as for these companies. Also, the warehouse...
^^
Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...pecified clearly by the vice president. The loss of food is only stated properly by...
^^^
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... stated properly by the vice president. The loss in Fly Away might be only 10% from...
^^^
Line 3, column 775, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to the bezoffs pests control company. The quantity of the food stored warehouse m...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to choose the better service provider. The environmental factor is not stated in t...
^^^
Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...way company might result a better choice for the palm city as compared to the bez...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 28.8173652695 21% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 408.0 441.139720559 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95588235294 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62171509556 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 204.123752495 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.352941176471 0.468620217663 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5862583029 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.421052632 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4736842105 23.324526521 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84210526316 5.70786347227 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252674908749 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985006324057 0.0743258471296 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079109416312 0.0701772020484 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17720836 0.128457276422 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712648239558 0.0628817314937 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.5979740519 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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