Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
In any government, industry or field there is always a leader i.e. the person which has the vision and capability to lead the government or any kind of industry. Leader is the one which gives the direction, is innovative and he or she should also be competitive too. So i stand by this statement that a successful leader should be very competitive but he should be co-operative too.
As in recent times, there is a generation of competition. Everyone competes with each-other. Competition start from school times when a children is always scolded when he gets less grades then their other classmates. So he always want to compete with others. In the same way, competition is also pervading in the other fields also. For instance, an industry owner should be good competitor in order to stay in the market otherwise the other company will take down the entire market. In same way a government should also be competive than their rivals so to stay in rule the ruling government or party will always try to provide various incentives that their rival party couldn't able to provide. So ultimately the common people will be benefitted from this type of competition.
When their is competition between the 2 or more indudtries or government the 3rd gets the benefits. for instance, In India to take down the whole market in the teleccom industry Mr. Ambani launched a new network i.e Jio which provided free services for certain period of that time and after that minute amount of charges stil much less than the other networks, so other companies also decided to lower their rates, as a result the ultimate gainer were people of India.
Though only the healthy competition is good, but when the competition is cut throat it is always dangerous. One company tries to take down the other company so as to become a monopoly and to gain all the favours by one company. So cooperation is also very necessary. For eg. to pass a bill in favour of the quotidian people there must be a cooperation between the two parties, they must reach on to a common consensus only then it will be favourable to people.
So at the end i would like to say that along with healthy competition there should also be a cooperation among the people to give benefits to nation as a whole
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, as to, for instance, kind of, as a result, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1861.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 397.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68765743073 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65862544324 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 204.123752495 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488664987406 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.471057884232 212% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4026172319 57.8364921388 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.388888889 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.70786347227 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296491410264 0.218282227539 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871370660607 0.0743258471296 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712106066242 0.0701772020484 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163093153226 0.128457276422 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555429056538 0.0628817314937 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.5979740519 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.