Techcorporation is our top pick for investment this term. We urge all of our clients to invest in this new company. For the first time in ten years, a company that has developed satellite technology has been approved by the FTA to compete with the current satellite provider. That company is Techcorporation. A consumer survey last year indicated that over eighty percent of respondents were dissatisfied with the current satellite television provider and would want to switch to another provider if the industry were not a monopoly. Thus, the new venture of Techcorporation into satellite television will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now.”
Given piece of argument seems to be appeared in newsletter offering an advice to investors.In this the author of argument talks about being investing in new satellite providing company name "techcorporation" as a suggestion to investors.Author provides basis of dissatisfied costumers on present satellite provider to make a shift on techcorporation's satellite.At first authors thought seems to be convincing but as we go further we get toknow that the authors argument is based on dubious assumptions which need to be evaluate unless and until the conclusion of "techcorporation being proven as highly profitable to people whoinvest now cannot be considered as viable".Thus there is a need of evaluating these argument.
First of all author talks about techcorporation as there top pick for investment in term and tells people to invest in this new company.Author provides the reason that for first time in ten years company has developed an satellite technology and have got approved through FTA to compete the present provider.From this support people would not try to make in investment in techcorporation.Author must provide more detail supportand evidences which will lead to shown the techcorporation as best than that of current satellite provider company.There might be the case that the techcorporation just bought the satellite technology from the current satellite provider rival on basis of paying huge sortof money?.Even they might have got there satellite approved through FTA through paying money to some debauch officers in corporation?.So author must provide answers to these questions arose and mustprovide different evidences depending on features of satellite system developed by techcorporation distinguished by the current satellite provider features.
Moving further author talks about the last year consumersurvey which indicated that eighty percent of respondents were dissatisfied with currentsatellite telivision provider and would like to switch to another provider.Here author must provide the detail data of why the people are about to change the satellite provider.Thing mighttake place that the contract would given to other company in market rather than techcorporation which will make no changes to the investment done by people in company.Thus will only result in loss to them.so author must provide valid reasons why the contract of new satellite if present got changed will be provided to techcorporation.AUthor must providwe details of consumer survey about the area survey took place.It can be the case that the survey have done in place where the telecasting network of present company is weak and the company might be working on it to provide better services?.So author must provide more evidences and reasons with details so that the authors statements can be taken intoconsideration.
Atlast author makes an conclusion that the new venture of techcorporation in satellite telivision will prove to be highly profitable for those who invest now,but this conclusion cannot be considered as viable unless the author provides the answers to the question arose and further on author must provide detail analysis of the feature and compatibility of both company products by which he can prove that the techcorporation satellite is far wat better than that of present company's satellite.Thus there should be overal cogency in the authors statements and conclusion then only it will be considered as viable and people will look forward to invest in techcorporation.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 554 350
No. of Characters: 2935 1500
No. of Different Words: 228 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.852 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.298 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.039 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 227 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 168 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 112 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 80 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 55.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 30.575 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.429 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.657 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.159 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to investing'.
Suggestion: to investing
... as viable and people will look forward to invest in techcorporation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then, thus, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 28.0 12.9520958084 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 55.5748502994 151% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2991.0 2260.96107784 132% => OK
No of words: 536.0 441.139720559 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5802238806 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55601321801 2.78398813304 128% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 204.123752495 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434701492537 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 938.7 705.55239521 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 19.7664670659 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 134.0 22.8473053892 587% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.415273127 57.8364921388 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 747.75 119.503703932 626% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 134.0 23.324526521 575% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.70786347227 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.25449101796 609% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218430100022 0.218282227539 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15570474102 0.0743258471296 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109721922804 0.0701772020484 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15570474102 0.128457276422 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109721922804 0.0628817314937 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 71.9 14.3799401198 500% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -81.45 48.3550499002 -168% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 7.1628742515 320% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 57.9 12.197005988 475% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.27 12.5979740519 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.67 8.32208582834 164% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 98.500998004 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 12.3882235529 492% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 55.6 11.1389221557 499% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 11.9071856287 512% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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