Since those issues of Newsbeat magazine that featured political news on their front cover were the poorest-selling issues over the past three years, the publisher of Newsbeat has recommended that the magazine curtail its emphasis on politics to focus more exclusively on economics and personal finance. She points to a recent survey of readers of general interest magazines that indicates greater reader interest in economic issues than in political ones. Newsbeat's editor, however, opposes the proposed shift in editorial policy, pointing out that very few magazines offer extensive political coverage anymore.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The changing in the type of magazine is a serious decision, and need lots of thought and consideration so author assumptions have lots of flawed. first of all, because the one-time poorest-selling in the statistics cannot lead to changing the subject of the newspaper, was this the legitimate and proper way to get together the data of the surveys of the reader, and last but not least, being among the few does not cover the cost of the magazine.
Firstly, the author mentions that once they had the poor selling.how they figure it out this due to the front cover. perhaps the front cover was not enough eye-catching .for example if you talk about the most exciting subject. and the front cover was not elegant people will not try to buy the magazine. this is a known fact so people use the professional photographer to take their pictures also send a huge amount of money on finding these people and deal with them. Not just this but also, the content is also important for reader people do not buy magazines with boring or old- fashion news. Therefore it is so important to use the exciting stories for these head of the magazines always look for people who has broadened their horizons and think out of the box. It is a known fact who like the job make every effort and sacrifice needed for his job.So the content is much more important than the subject.
Secondly, how they conclude that people like the economics more than a political issue. Since economics is affected by the political matters. Moreover, who was the participant in the surveys are they ask enough people who were from different age group. Since people from different age group like different things.For example, the young always keen on sports, on the other hand, the old likes gardening.
Thirdly, The number of magazines connot guarantee the selling rate. since every newspaper have the page on political maters. However, In my country, people spend all their time listening to newspaper and watching the news from all around the world. but in Japan, people like to work more and more
In conclusion, changing or not changing the topic of the newspaper has lots of consideration. So people who like to change should be more realistic and pay attention to statistics, will not judge according to one-time selling, and think more about the content.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1935.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 402.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81343283582 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5331066971 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 204.123752495 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.471057884232 637% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4882091802 57.8364921388 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 5.70786347227 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14005300832 0.218282227539 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535779403998 0.0743258471296 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031564808286 0.0701772020484 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800463859174 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385385041402 0.0628817314937 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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