- Two years ago our consultants predicted that West Egg s landfill which is used for garbage disposal would be completely filled within five years During the past two years however town residents have been recycling twice as much aluminum and paper as they 77
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disag 58
- Manned space flight is costly and dangerous Moreover the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men 83
- Men and women because of their inherent physical differences are not equally suited for many tasks 54
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company quot According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than 50
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...is based on the fact that the residents near by West Eggs landfill are heavily concentr...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 577, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...lievable that argument has strong point but however it is not persuasive as it is based on ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 644, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...asive as it is based on assumptions and doesnt have supported evidence. First and for...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...s based upon the historical data. -How many number of features were considered while predi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the recycling will be increased further , on what basis will this happen? Do we h...
^^
Line 7, column 491, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...en charges of garbage pickup increases? if not , this statement was also an assump...
^^
Line 7, column 497, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rges of garbage pickup increases? if not , this statement was also an assumption. ...
^^
Line 8, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y says residents will increase recycling , only aluminum and paper or will there b...
^^
Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e recycled by them. In addition to this , migration of population is a normal hab...
^^
Line 10, column 519, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering recycling'.
Suggestion: considering recycling
...ut this is an assumption. Are residents considering to recycle any other material than aluminum and pa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in addition, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.6327345309 194% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.9520958084 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 13.6137724551 176% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 28.8173652695 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 55.5748502994 131% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2891.0 2260.96107784 128% => OK
No of words: 581.0 441.139720559 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97590361446 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61271636417 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 204.123752495 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435456110155 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.0 705.55239521 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 19.7664670659 142% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8636131518 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 119.503703932 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 23.324526521 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.70786347227 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 5.15768463074 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343977908129 0.218282227539 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981177385896 0.0743258471296 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900664789296 0.0701772020484 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137459740452 0.128457276422 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956493757394 0.0628817314937 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 98.500998004 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...is based on the fact that the residents near by West Eggs landfill are heavily concentr...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 577, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...lievable that argument has strong point but however it is not persuasive as it is based on ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 644, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...asive as it is based on assumptions and doesnt have supported evidence. First and for...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...s based upon the historical data. -How many number of features were considered while predi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 332, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the recycling will be increased further , on what basis will this happen? Do we h...
^^
Line 7, column 491, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...en charges of garbage pickup increases? if not , this statement was also an assump...
^^
Line 7, column 497, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rges of garbage pickup increases? if not , this statement was also an assumption. ...
^^
Line 8, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y says residents will increase recycling , only aluminum and paper or will there b...
^^
Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e recycled by them. In addition to this , migration of population is a normal hab...
^^
Line 10, column 519, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considering recycling'.
Suggestion: considering recycling
...ut this is an assumption. Are residents considering to recycle any other material than aluminum and pa...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in addition, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.6327345309 194% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.9520958084 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 11.1786427146 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 13.6137724551 176% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 28.8173652695 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 55.5748502994 131% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2891.0 2260.96107784 128% => OK
No of words: 581.0 441.139720559 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97590361446 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61271636417 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 204.123752495 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435456110155 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.0 705.55239521 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 19.7664670659 142% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8636131518 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.25 119.503703932 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 23.324526521 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.70786347227 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 5.15768463074 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343977908129 0.218282227539 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981177385896 0.0743258471296 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900664789296 0.0701772020484 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137459740452 0.128457276422 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956493757394 0.0628817314937 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 98.500998004 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.