As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious.
It is commonly said that the more you know the less you understand, that is, acquire more knowledge may not help every time to get clarity and things may seems to be hard and vague. I believe that too much information creates confusion for some people and people find it difficult to apply even in simple context. I shall the reasons behind this.
Knowledge is infinite and acquire substantial knowledge require hard work and determination but it is commonly observed that people do not understand how to grasp the true sense of knowledge and miss the important contexts of information. Consequently, proper linking of facts and idea is not done and half cooked information leads to confusion, plus it make the things far more difficult as they are. Also, without proper background of topic, individuals start to learn in the middle, resulting incomplete information about the facts and data that is not only difficult to comprehend but also confusion the mind.
However, people say that even the literary people who have command of subjects and facts, get confused quite often. The primary reason is different source of information which makes it difficult to streamline and structure. For example, different subject matter expert try to put their views on economic condition by linking different parameters such as employment, growth, export & import but still most of the time prediction deviates from real scenario. The another reason is false information availability which is published to create the non-clarity in people’s mind and mistakenly people get influenced and feel that too much knowledge cause problems.
To sum up, there are no doubts that linking of vast knowledge sometimes leads to confusion in mind but if facts are correct and understood in correct context then knowledge helps to solve mystery and understand concepts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, still, then, for example, no doubt, such as, you know, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 2260.96107784 69% => OK
No of words: 298.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22147651007 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80247203546 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.468620217663 125% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 705.55239521 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5828407999 57.8364921388 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.454545455 119.503703932 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 23.324526521 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 5.70786347227 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991557167769 0.218282227539 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036190009668 0.0743258471296 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696995321955 0.0701772020484 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656828082304 0.128457276422 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694176075124 0.0628817314937 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.3799401198 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.3550499002 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 98.500998004 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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