Workers in the small town of Leeville take fewer sick days than workers in the large city of Masonton, 50 miles away. Moreover, relative to population size, the diagnosis of stress-related illness is proportionally much lower in Leeville than in Masonton. According to the Leeville Chamber of Commerce, these facts can be attributed to the health benefits of the relatively relaxed pace of life in Leeville.
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.
The argument ascertains about the reason why small town of Leeville has fewer sick days than workers in the large city of Masonton. It purported that because diagnosis of stress-related illness from Leeville is relatively much lower and more relaxed pace of life than Masonton. It seems logically convincing at first glance, but in detail, it has many types of unsubstantiated explanation that affect the argument negatively. There can have various types of alternative explanation according to this argument.
First of all, the alternative explanation is that workers in small town of Leeville has less proportion of work than the worker from large city of Masonton. Take for instance, worker from Leeville has 6 to 9 hours for 5days whereas worker from Masonton has 11 to 12 hours for 6 days with extra work at weekend. Ever since those work time is very different and it will eventually affect worker’s healthy.
Secondly, the other explanation of this argument can be that worker psychological mind. Since there is evidence that worker from small town has relatively relaxed pace life than worker from large city, company from two different region probably have different atmosphere. While company from Leeville gives free-atmosphere, which workers can have 10 minutes break in any time, company from Masonton is more controlled atmosphere; indeed, worker can’t even go man’s room and lady’s room.
Furthermore, another alternative explanation can be environmental situation between Leeville and Masonton. The reason why worker from Masonton are sick easily is because there are many cars and factories in that city, which causes pollution and finally affect most of workers in Masonton. On the other hand, small town of Leeville has beautiful weather, such as sun is glowing, wind is breezing, and rain can be portable.
In conclusion, one of these three alternative explanation will help for this argument, which was unsubstantiated and non-logically sound, then it will help to understand what the argument will support, it will truly understandable toward the explanation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'region' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'regions'.
Suggestion: regions
... large city, company from two different region probably have different atmosphere. Whi...
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Line 5, column 502, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o man's room and lady's room. Furthermore, another alternative explana...
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Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the workers') or simply say ''most workers''.
Suggestion: most of the workers; most workers
...ich causes pollution and finally affect most of workers in Masonton. On the other hand, small t...
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Line 7, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is breezing, and rain can be portable. In conclusion, one of these three altern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 329.0 441.139720559 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00608056402 2.78398813304 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492401215805 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 705.55239521 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4741146997 57.8364921388 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.571428571 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 5.70786347227 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374018972191 0.218282227539 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150774580458 0.0743258471296 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14409336587 0.0701772020484 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216331677272 0.128457276422 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132228418933 0.0628817314937 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.3799401198 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.3550499002 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.5979740519 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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