Archaeological surveys are important as it helps us understand how the evolution of species took place, discover the events that took place that were responsible for the emergence of civilization as well as decimation. They also uncover the evolution of culture and bring about the historical importance of a place which might become a heritage. On top of these, such sites are essentially a “Non-renewable” resource of knowledge, which will guide us in the future. Hence accurately understanding the past is significant.
The conclusion that the Palean baskets are not unique to Paleans are based on many assumptions which needs to be fact checked. The mere presence of a river cannot be the basis of this.
It is likely that the river was broadened and deepened by a natural historical event which took place separating Palea and Lithos. Ancient villages almost always spring near rivers and it is likely that Palea and Lithos were the same village indeed. Due to a natural event, the river flooded, and it was responsible for people to abandon the village. Hence careful survey needs to be carried out to eliminate the possibility that Palea and Lithos were different villages to start with.
Another assumption considered is that Paleans did not know swimming. This assumption needs to be ruled out because a broad and deep river does not qualify the river as a torrent. The river might just be a sloth, enabling the Paleans to cross it without much struggle.
The archaeologists should also find whether both the villages were trading goods. The remains of goods that the archaeologists consider were Lithos specific should be searched in Palea to establish a fact whether goods were exchanged between the village. This finding, irrespective to other assumption, will conform that the baskets found were unique to Palea and will also explain why they were found at Lithos.
Although modern technology is highly effective for which it is made for, there are still cases when it took people decades to find enormous construction even when they knew what they were looking for. For example it took nearly 70 years to uncover the Titanic, a gigantic structure when compared to small boats built in prehistoric times. Hence a very careful examination of the site needs to be done, with an equal efforts to investigate the river basin for remains of boats. The fact that we do not know what the boats might look like, and that the village is a prehistoric site only adds to the efforts to conclude that paleans were incapable to constructing of boats to cross the river.
In conclusion, the assumption on which the conclusion that the baskets found were not unique to Palea is riddled with holes. Any of these assumptions if proved otherwise will change the fact. Hence although it is possible for two different community to develop the same type of basket, trying to prove them otherwise will uncover many more crucial information such as Paleans had developed boats much before any other civilization, or uncover a natural event that formed Brim river, establishment of trade.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 514 350
No. of Characters: 2517 1500
No. of Different Words: 239 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.761 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.897 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 164 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.348 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.774 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.565 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...op of these, such sites are essentially a 'Non-renewable' resource of k...
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Line 1, column 477, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...dge, which will guide us in the future. Hence accurately understanding the past is si...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ible for people to abandon the village. Hence careful survey needs to be carried out ...
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Line 8, column 83, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r both the villages were trading goods. The remains of goods that the archaeologist...
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Line 10, column 340, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...small boats built in prehistoric times. Hence a very careful examination of the site ...
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Line 10, column 417, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'effort'?
Suggestion: effort
...he site needs to be done, with an equal efforts to investigate the river basin for rema...
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Line 12, column 193, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... proved otherwise will change the fact. Hence although it is possible for two differe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, still, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.6327345309 173% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 13.6137724551 169% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 28.8173652695 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2592.0 2260.96107784 115% => OK
No of words: 514.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04280155642 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82911221239 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 204.123752495 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47859922179 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 705.55239521 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1247759441 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.695652174 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.347826087 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 5.70786347227 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122895222712 0.218282227539 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384533832678 0.0743258471296 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402514086915 0.0701772020484 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619193268046 0.128457276422 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334382570836 0.0628817314937 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.3799401198 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 98.500998004 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 12.3882235529 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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