Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people Recently however archaeol

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Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.

The author concludes that Palean baskets were not unique and can be found in other villages. The archaeologists have discovered a Palean basket in Lithos village located across the Brim River from Palea village to buttress the author's statement. The author mentions that the river is very deep and broad and can be traveled only by boat, and no Paleans boats found; hence, the author's conclusion is averring. However, while the conclusion drawn by the author might hold water, it rests on several unfounded assumptions that, if not substantiated, dramatically attenuates the persuasiveness of the argument. Therefore, the following points need to be addressed.
Firstly, the author did not consider the possibility of a barter system that used to be a significant factor in trading. It might be possible that the two villages are involved in trading activity, and therefore, the Palean baskets were encountered in the Lithos village by the archaeologists. Earlier, trading plays a crucial role in the lives of people. There was no money in the past, and hence people of different tribes were involved in a trading activity that involved exchanging goods among people. This was the basic amenity, and people used to trade products to ensure better living and hence, the civilians of Palea village and the Lithos village might be indulged in such activities.
Secondly, the author has mentioned that the Brim river is very broad and wide, and both the villages were diverged by this river. Additionally, traveling by boat was a feasible solution to cross the river. However, the author has not considered that many underwater caves exist in prehistoric times. Because many risk-factor involved while traveling through boats in the broad rivers, people used to travel through caves to ensure their safety; moreover, it might be possible that there is a longer route circumscribing the river to the Lithos village. It would be difficult for the villagers to take their goods to other villages by boat, and hence they use to transport their goods by the land in their bullock-carts.
In addition to this, there is a little possibility that the villagers of Lithos have made their own baskets for their daily use and comparing it with the baskets of Paleans seems to be identical. The author provides no such evidence by this point.
A careful analysis exposes the loopholes present in the argument by the author. Moreover, the argument does not seem to be strong enough to buttress the conclusion that the Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean because all the reasons provided by the author are dubious. Hence, the author must rethink and should provide logical and foolproof pieces of evidence.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...iver from Palea village to buttress the authors statement. The author mentions that the...
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Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lage to buttress the authors statement. The author mentions that the river is very ...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... and no Paleans boats found; hence, the authors conclusion is averring. However, while ...
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Line 3, column 655, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... other villages by boat, and hence they use to transport their goods by the land in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2255.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 442.0 441.139720559 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10180995475 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72988435393 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457013574661 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 705.55239521 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.76447105788 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.67365269461 358% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8967575088 57.8364921388 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144813288265 0.218282227539 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471328531514 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524268808779 0.0701772020484 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901684930453 0.128457276422 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367834421954 0.0628817314937 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 98.500998004 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 442 350
No. of Characters: 2203 1500
No. of Different Words: 198 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.585 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.984 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.635 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 165 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 119 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.246 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.329 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5