26 The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
There is not any necessary relations between human qualities and modern commodities. People nowadays with luxuries and convenience may help them make through their life easier and embrace a brighter life. And on the other way around, they can invent more convenient technologies for serving to humans immediate and long-term needs.
People's great qualities will not show up or disappear with these things' company. People may get lazy because of their handy, however, their talents and strong will will not be altered by using them. From Martin Luther King to Presidents Obama, they both are extra...
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