"In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years." - Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing

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"In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years." -

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.

The argument states that power, in any institution,shouldn't be allowed to be centralized or constantly remain in the hands of a single person or group. I fully agree with this statement & believe that for any institution to operate efficiently & smoothly,the power center should regularly change in order to introduce new ways of thinking or new ideas. A person or group of persons,if allowed to remain in power for an indefinite time,more often than not becomes too comfortable in that postion. They get too used to the power in their hands & as a result,become overconfident & begin to misma...

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Sentence: A person or group of persons, if allowed to remain in power for an indefinite time, more often than not becomes too comfortable in that postion.
Error: postion Suggestion: position

Sentence: Another advantage provided by such a system is that it gives equal oppurtunities to all instead of confining power within a select group.
Error: oppurtunities Suggestion: opportunities

Sentence: Other members of the institution who may be genuinely talented & deserving of taking charge will thus get an oppurtunity to take up responsibility,thus increasing the institution's efficiency.
Error: oppurtunity Suggestion: opportunity

Sentence: They should be the ones to decide whether to keep the same group in power or to assign the responsibilty to a new one, even in times of trouble.
Error: responsibilty Suggestion: responsibility

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