Claim: In any field-business, politics, education, government-those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
The new leadership provides fresh thoughts, emerging ideas and enthusiasm to work place whereas experienced leardership provides guidance, support and exposure to different facets of problem. Whether to retain the person in power or not after five years is matter of debate and comes under the jurisdiction of subjective analysis. There is no straightword asnswer to it.
Politics, the word remind us the term democracy and corruption. In democracy, governemnt is elected for five years tenure. In most of the cases the elected government fail to perform their duty and even do not provide the bas...
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Sentence: Politics, the word remind us the term democracy and corruption.
Description: The fragment word remind us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace remind with verb, past tense
Sentence: The new leadership provides fresh thoughts, emerging ideas and enthusiasm to work place whereas experienced leardership provides guidance, support and exposure to different facets of problem.
Error: leardership Suggestion: leadership
Sentence: There is no straightword asnswer to it.
Error: asnswer Suggestion: answer
Error: straightword Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In democracy, governemnt is elected for five years tenure.
Error: governemnt Suggestion: government
Sentence: Information techonology is the dynamic field where everyday new versions of software and hardware capture the market.
Error: techonology Suggestion: technology
Sentence: The accounting software like Peachtree, Quick Book, Money Pro etc have been adpoted by many companies in recent years.
Error: adpoted Suggestion: adopted
Sentence: The companies hired new IT leaders in presense of experienced one in order to incorporate this technological advancement in company.
Error: presense Suggestion: presence
Sentence: The unexperienced faculty would fail due to the lack of knoweldge and imparting information to others and they should not provide leadership position untill they have been to well experienced and mature.
Error: untill Suggestion: until
Error: knoweldge Suggestion: knowledge
Sentence: In contrast to the statment, the specialized field of education, business management etc can not afford to have an new leadership every five years.
Error: statment Suggestion: statement
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No. of Words: 511 350
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No. of Different Words: 240 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.755 4.7
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Sentence Length SD: 7.83 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.463 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
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