Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Good leadership is the most important reason for the success of any team in any field. The good leadership is the one that provides the vision along the way the team will move in and also that inspires the team members to do their best. The question is how to have a good leadership? Is it experience only that selects certain person to be the leader? If that is true, then that person in power will stay in his position forever as he is the only one who has experience.
Many people believe that those people in power are experienced people that we should not take the risk by changing them or by ...
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Sentence: This will make sure that new fresh people will be in charge and therfore will open the door to new thinking, new ideas and hence new creative innovations.
Error: therfore Suggestion: therefore
Sentence: An important reason for the continous change of people in charge is proection from corruption.
Error: continous Suggestion: continuous
Error: proection Suggestion: projection
Sentence: If we consider any of the dicatoric countries where the president stays along his life and there is no limited precidency tenure, we will find that the people are suffering and complaining from the corruption and the bad services introduced to them plus the irresposibility of those men in power that are not questioned from people.
Error: irresposibility Suggestion: irresponsibly
Error: precidency Suggestion: presidency
Error: dicatoric Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Even if we go to another fields away from politics like Education, we will see that changing the men responsibe will allow us to always have new brains that are able to find new education techniques and develop these techniques.
Error: responsibe Suggestion: responsible
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