The claim proposed is actually threefold: (1) Heros and role models reveal a society's highest ideals; (2) Character of a society is strongly relevant to the highest ideals within the society; (3) It is the best way to reveal the character of a society by examining symbolics selected as the role models.
First of all, Heros and role models do not definately indicate a society's highest ideals. Admittedly, certain models do sometimes represent the ideal personality which allows the general public to follow, nevertheless, respective figure among groups of people makes it difficult to predict w...
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Sentence: Furthermore, with other ways which can be better is situations than examining models can we also understand the character of a society.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and situations
Sentence: First of all, Heros and role models do not definately indicate a society's highest ideals.
Error: definately Suggestion: definitely
Sentence: Understandably, none of the two models can wholely represent the highest ideal in the field of literature in China.
Error: wholely Suggestion: wholly
Sentence: Lei Feng who used to be a soldier with a cheerful heart has been the ideal figure of people who is accomodating of Chinese people for decades.
Error: accomodating Suggestion: accommodating
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No. of Words: 616 350 (write the essay in half an hour)
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 616 350
No. of Characters: 3143 1500
No. of Different Words: 299 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.982 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.102 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.984 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 258 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 190 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 127 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 90 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 34.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.891 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.343 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.551 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5