As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate
Technology keep on increasing day to day at the same time people rely more and more on it. Relying on technology doesn’t mean people are unable to think on their own or solve their problems independently. I believe the ability of people to think on themselves doesn’t get deteriorated for the following reasons.
Firstly, people are passionate in using new technologies and inventing new sources of technology. People change the sources of technologies and keep on upgrading them in order to move on with latest trend and fast moving society. If man is unable to think on his own he may not be able to use new sources of technology. People thinking on their own started developing lots of applications. For example Charles Babbage invented computer, his ability doesn’t get deteriorated using an adding machine so called calculator.
Further people started relying on the technology due to short of time and made them comfortable, today the human relations got elaborated than we have in past. One can’t suppose be able to memorize all the contacts and get confused so he make use of telephone directory to make it simple. People find the new ways to solve the problem and increase their ability to think in developing new ways.
Relying on the technology increased due to time factor and fast moving society. Use of technology made most of people to think innovative and increased the one’s capability to think in learning the usage of new technologies, but it never deteriorate one’s capability to think own or solve independently.
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Sentence: Technology keep on increasing day to day at the same time people rely more and more on it.
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Sentence: One can't suppose be able to memorize all the contacts and get confused so he make use of telephone directory to make it simple.
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