People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
The World moves so celerity. life is become so busy or confound, in such condition some times risk we have to take. Every person start from childhood to old age every body have to take risk if he want to live there life. But while taking risk we have to account consequences of risk. so i completely agree People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Every person in life lot of time take risk. risk is like in business, education or some time medical treatment many factor. if we want to successful in Business person now days we have to take risk. if we dare to take risk then sole chances to become good business man. ex one of my mate want to open hotel business on new highway. he take loan from bank. it is his dare to take loan from bank that help him open hotel. but before he decided he have take aspect of other factor also such as it worth to open hotel such highway or is there other hotel near his hotel that factor also to be consider.
Big risk now days in share market. we have know all factor of company which we take share.such as growth, location, success rate of that company. it not like we invest money in share market and get back lot of profit from that. we have consider all factor of shares and that company.
Risk is every factor in our life. like education, if some one not interest to learn some thing we force pressure to him. such big loss of that person personal life. ex nihar wants to carrier in cricket but due to parent forcing him to doctor. such condition he west his collage life. and after several of years he joins cricket academy. or some not want to learn maths and sciences but parent force him. such condition student whole wiepout interest of education field.
Day to day we suffer many type of risk, such as fat car drive, bike race or adventure camps. we have to account it consequences such hazards. such one second blunder damage the whole life in bike race or rock climbing. ex one day our trip was went to the rock climbing with out any equipment, the one of my mate suffer in to accident. he had fracture one leg and hand. In such circumstances risk undertake is most important.
But some field without risk consideration also help in experimental or research feild. ex student want to other experiment and he get other factor of that experiment. that is find one get another. innovation team also help without risk consideration. If they think about risk it impossible to get new experiments and innovation.
Risk is vital in the life, if we want to go ahead in life. with out risk it difficult to live now days. at aspect of all point consider there is pro and cons of risk consideration but leave point of medical research and expriment we conclude that people have to take risk but should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
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Sentence: Every person start from childhood to old age every body have to take risk if he want to live there life.
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Sentence: Every person in life lot of time take risk. risk is like in business, education or some time medical treatment many factor. if we want to successful in Business person now days we have to take risk. if we dare to take risk then sole chances to become good business man. ex one of my mate want to open hotel business on new highway. he take loan from bank. it is his dare to take loan from bank that help him open hotel. but before he decided he have take aspect of other factor also such as it
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Sentence: Big risk now days in share market. we have know all factor of company which we take share.such as growth, location, success rate of that company. it not like we invest money in share market and get back lot of profit from that. we have consider all factor of shares and that company.
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Sentence: Day to day we suffer many type of risk, such as fat car drive, bike race or adventure camps. we have to account it consequences such hazards. such one second blunder damage the whole life in bike race or rock climbing. ex one day our trip was went to the rock climbing with out any equipment, the one of my mate suffer in to accident. he had fracture one leg and hand.
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Sentence: But some field without risk consideration also help in experimental or research feild. ex student want to other experiment and he get other factor of that experiment. that is find one get another. innovation team also help without risk consideration.
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Sentence: Risk is vital in the life, if we want to go ahead in life. with out risk it difficult to live now days. at aspect of all point consider there is pro and cons of risk consideration but leave point of medical research and expriment we conclude that people have to take risk but should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
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para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
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