Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Technology refers to the part of science which is used generally to make any task easier. As human brain is developing the technology is also burgeoning. Technology is a broader term which subsumes many things we can see even in our day to day life. It has wide-spread in almost all aspects of our life. It has its effect on many fields like communication, transportation, war-craft s, Space-crafts and many more. Globalization is achieved due to the advancement in technology.
In olden days as there was not much advancement in technology as it is now, it was more difficult for us to perform many tasks. The work needed more efforts and time as well. Just to reach from one country to another a person had to change different modes of transport. It was time consuming and was much costlier. With enhancement in the technology a person can move from one part of globe to another within no time.
Today is would be very difficult to live without usage of technology. It has been possible for human being to reach moon because of technology. We can see the effect of technology in our day to day life. We use electronic appliances such as laptop, mobile phone for communication, home appliances to make food and perform all other house-hold activities, Car for transportation. All these things have made our life much easier. Technology has made many things simpler and has a major influence on our lives.
As every coin has two sides technology has its own disadvantages as well. It has not only made man inactive but also made his life more complicated. Today we cannot imagine our lives without usage of technology. As technology flourished it had opened many options which made our life more complicated. It has become very difficult for a person to choose a particular option. Also it has decreased the personal bonding among people. People are getting away from each other day by day because they get much involved in the technology.
To Sum, Though technology has some disadvantages on human life, it has always proved to be a boon to make life easier and luxurious. It also proves a major role in development of human being. We cannot deny the fact that we can today dream to live on moon just because of advancement in technology. SO with proper usage of technology at proper place and time we can make our lives simpler.
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