Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The end justifys the means; so they say. Irrespective of whatever path youths take to achieve success whether by immediate fame and recognition or through long term realistic goals, the important thing is that they are able to achieve success in their various fields.
Fame begets fame. The moment one is famous for his handiwork, such a fellow has established a good fan base among society which is good encouragement to such a fellow. It is left for the individual to channel his newly achieved fame positively, by working harder to improve on his/her skills to get even better at their professio...
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