Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The end justifys the means; so they say. Irrespective of whatever path youths take to achieve success whether by immediate fame and recognition or through long term realistic goals, the important thing is that they are able to achieve success in their various fields.
Fame begets fame. The moment one is famous for his handiwork, such a fellow has established a good fan base among society which is good encouragement to such a fellow. It is left for the individual to channel his newly achieved fame positively, by working harder to improve on his/her skills to get even better at their professio...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2013-08-24 | Reham Youssef | 63 | view |
| 2013-07-29 | Chukky | 86 | view |
- Claim When planning courses educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students Reason Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying Write a response in which you discuss the extent 65
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company."According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any 64
- College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to ad 54
- The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of a manufacturing company."During the past year, workers at our newly opened factory reported 30 percent more on-the-job accidents than workers at nearby Panoply Industries. Panoply produces products 90
- The following appeared in a memo from the new vice president of Sartorian, a company that manufactures men's clothing."Five years ago, at a time when we had difficulty obtaining reliable supplies of high-quality wool fabric, we discontinued production of 82
Sentence: This is the case with prodigy singers like Justin Beiber whose advent of stardom went on to bring out more of his artisitic talent.
Error: artisitic Suggestion: artistic
It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/gmatgre
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 481 350
No. of Characters: 2240 1500
No. of Different Words: 240 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.683 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.657 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.461 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.254 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.44 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.264 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.448 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.088 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5