Human brain is said to more powerful than common computers we use today. The computing prowess and complex problem solving ability of human brain is second to none. The fact that, the real reason behind the genesis of computers and smart technological devices that we use today are due to best use of human brain and intrinsic curiosity to build effective and efficient systems which are more reliable than human brain.
Humans developed technology to assist in daily working and today it has become so far spread that every act of human is somewhat driven through technology. This over reliance on technology has manifested in myriad of problems. First of all, it has made people unhealthy. Now a days most of the work happens in offices and through computers. This had affected human health negatively and surely impacts the quick thinking ability. The aphorism that "within healthy body resides healthy mind". In effect physiological impacts of technology is deteriorating the human computing capability.
Humans from the time of evolution has developed critical computing and thinking abilities. With the advent of technology the human ability seems to have taken a back seat. For example, before computers or calculators arrived on the scene, all the complex problem solving and computing was done manually and quickly. Now even for small calculations we need to look for calculators or computers. Children today are not able to count, add, subtract or multiply quickly on their own. This is alarming as it seems the problems have propagated to our future generations.
Technology is not restricted to solving complex problems or calculations. Today it is developing building designs, optimal circuit designs, medical instruments. With the invention and current refinement of artificial intelligence the future belongs to technology where computers will learn and adapt to numerous situations. This will have impact when humans would not have to think about anything and computers will take care of everything. This is a precarious situation and when we need humans to think quickly and act, the mind freeze happens and people are not able to respond as quickly as possible.
In totality, the current generation seems hovering towards becoming slaves of the technology and living in a virtual world. To make ourselves more effective in critical thinking we must overcome the crazy need of technology across every aspect of our life. Rather we must focus to spend some time polishing our mental skills and gray matter.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the best'.
Suggestion: to the best
...gical devices that we use today are due to best use of human brain and intrinsic curios...
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Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...t of all, it has made people unhealthy. Now a days most of the work happens in offices and...
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Line 9, column 258, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...nology across every aspect of our life. Rather we must focus to spend some time polish...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28395061728 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76342961008 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528395061728 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4595438761 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191568536027 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531789000186 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370517524168 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104436562765 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231883008085 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.