There are umpteen of indicators which decide whether a nation stands out from others or it stands far behind.Among those indicators, basic physiological needs,education,security are of utmost importance.There could be rulers,artists or scientists whose contribution to the nation is remarkable and unavoidable but that could not suffice to make the nation a paragon of excellence.Here, I concur with the assertion that only the eminent persons and their achievements can not be responsible solely to define the greatness of a nation.In the ensuing paragraph, I shall aptly illustrate my point of view with some examples.
First of all, a nation may produce dynamic engineers,invent some ground-breaking experiments and explore beyond the horizon but that does not imply that each and every corner of that nation enjoys the boon of science. Let me cite an example to shed some light on this point of view.In my country India,which already established it's position on global platform as one of the greatest country in terms of space explorations,innovation of cutting-edge technologies.However, the knowledge of economic status and the number of under-privileged people are utterly disheartening.There are so many places in our country which still do not have the connection of electricity.In this aspect,a nation wearing the crown of excellence seems too apocryphal and ludicrous.
Secondly, a nation can produce a myriad of Nobel laureates which is arrantly very encouraging to the layperson and instill impetus to pave the trail of their own success.But in sharp juxtaposition, there are people who do not have access to all the basic physiological needs like food,water and shelter and their lives are stricken with proverty and lack of sanitation and health treatment have made their lives miserable.On this ground one can easily casts doubts on such nations greatness or the given title " paradigm of excellence".
Furthermore, This kind of situation can easily be conceived, if we try to draw a analogy between the situation of nation and a small enterprise or institution.For example, if an educational institute is capable of producing some students say, ten percent who achieve exceptional accomplishments in a competitive exam while the remaining ninety percent students appeared with ranks which is quite unsatisfactory.In contrary,there is a instituion where eighty percent of students come up with decent score would inevitably achieved a real success.
To sum up,a great nation is not a nation which produce a handful of examples or a nation where only few people can enjoy their basic rights rather a nation which gives people access to there rights and make the whole nation an inclusive one.
- What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Use specific details to support your response. 60
- do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 80
- "In order to save a considerable amount of money, Rockingham's century-old town hall should be torn down and replaced by the larger and more energy-efficient building that some citizens have proposed. The old town hall is too small to comfortably accommod 33
- Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 70
- Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Among
...out from others or it stands far behind.Among those indicators, basic physiological n...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , education
...se indicators, basic physiological needs,education,security are of utmost importance.There...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ation,security are of utmost importance.There could be rulers,artists or scientists w...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , artists
... utmost importance.There could be rulers,artists or scientists whose contribution to the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not suffice to make the nation a paragon of excellence.Here, I concur with the as...
^^
Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Here
...ake the nation a paragon of excellence.Here, I concur with the assertion that only ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 535, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ely to define the greatness of a nation.In the ensuing paragraph, I shall aptly il...
^^
Line 2, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , invent
..., a nation may produce dynamic engineers,invent some ground-breaking experiments and ex...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...o shed some light on this point of view.In my country India,which already establis...
^^
Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...n this point of view.In my country India,which already established its position on glo...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 421, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , innovation
...t country in terms of space explorations,innovation of cutting-edge technologies.However, t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...innovation of cutting-edge technologies.However, the knowledge of economic status and ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e technologies.However, the knowledge of economic status and the number of under-...
^^
Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ileged people are utterly disheartening.There are so many places in our country which...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 667, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... not have the connection of electricity.In this aspect,a nation wearing the crown ...
^^
Line 2, column 681, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...connection of electricity.In this aspect,a nation wearing the crown of excellence ...
^^
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... to pave the trail of their own success.But in sharp juxtaposition, there are peopl...
^^^
Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , water
... the basic physiological needs like food,water and shelter and their lives are stricke...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...eatment have made their lives miserable.On this ground one can easily casts doubts...
^^
Line 4, column 453, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cast'
Suggestion: cast
...miserable.On this ground one can easily casts doubts on such nations greatness or the...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 474, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...und one can easily casts doubts on such nations greatness or the given title ' par...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... easily be conceived, if we try to draw a analogy between the situation of nation...
^
Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...n and a small enterprise or institution.For example, if an educational institute is...
^^^
Line 6, column 412, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ith ranks which is quite unsatisfactory.In contrary,there is a instituion where ei...
^^
Line 6, column 423, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...hich is quite unsatisfactory.In contrary,there is a instituion where eighty percent of...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 433, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ite unsatisfactory.In contrary,there is a instituion where eighty percent of stud...
^
Line 6, column 522, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'achieve'
Suggestion: achieve
...e up with decent score would inevitably achieved a real success. To sum up,a great na...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...ly achieved a real success. To sum up,a great nation is not a nation which prod...
^^
Line 8, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ather a nation which gives people access to there rights and make the whole natio...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, kind of, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41882352941 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.59565597194 2.79657885939 129% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571764705882 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 23.0359550562 304% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.747109172 60.3974514979 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 383.833333333 118.986275619 323% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.8333333333 23.4991977007 301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6666666667 5.21951772744 396% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176963968717 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892130752399 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039953726551 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101272732499 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344073168515 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.5 14.1392134831 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.03 48.8420337079 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 12.1743820225 261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.34 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.68 8.38706741573 139% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 100.480337079 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.8971910112 269% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 11.2143820225 268% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.7820224719 272% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.