About us
We have been taking classes for these children for more than 2 years now. We have seen them growing & have been emotionally connected with them. Initially, we thought to spend 5-6 hours a week with them would make us help them in any way, but it is during these years we realized that there are so many issues that these children face every day and we as an individual might fail to solve.
We wonder if children from the capital of the country are facing such issues what would be the case at the national level. We were scared of this thought and this made us approach the Government of Delhi.
We have seen how serious the Delhi Government has been in the Health & Education Sector.
This makes us believe that people in the Gov are serious and understand the value & Importance of education.
Thus, In this document, we present some issues that prevail in our system & also the possible solutions which, if implemented, may solve a big Problem related to Education, Poverty & Crime in Delhi.
We request the government to take some points from this document, implement them & Lead a way for other states to adopt such pointers.
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- statement of purpose 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e us approach the Government of Delhi. We have seen how serious the Delhi Governm...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o Education, Poverty & Crime in Delhi. We request the government to take some p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 2235.4752809 42% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 442.535393258 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70351758794 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39842303932 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623115577889 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 704.065955056 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6642701018 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0647226637342 0.243740707755 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340484699238 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508560030842 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401673406863 0.150359130593 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476405026811 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 100.480337079 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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