The issue states that an ailing patient should have access to his or her doctor's previous records, of treating similarly afflicted patients; as, such an access will enable the patient to evaluate the competency of the doctor to treat that medical condition. This is tantamount to saying that just by analyzing previous records of success or failures, we can conclude whether the person is competent in that field or not.Of course, we cannot expect everyone to be a savant in every field, hence we need some kind of proof in order to rely on the other person; thus looking at the past records is quite an enabler for one to come to a conclusion. This is further elucidated in the following paragraphs.
When we purchase a new house, we do keep in mind the goodwill and reputation of the builder, and the success of the builder's earlier projects.Looking at his previous projects we are assured that the builder uses quality cement, delivers what he promises with world class construction and amenities. Insight from his previous works,is one of the most influencing factors for us do decide whether we are investing in the right project or not, after all for some it is their entire life's savings that is at stake; so without any previous record of good projects , it will be difficult for one to decide. New projects hence face a challenge when they are launched, and take time to convince people of their quality work because they do not having anything to show.
Similarly, when we choose a school or a college or a coaching institute for our children, we go by the results of the previous batch, one which has maximum number of top scorers and dedicated staff and faculty becomes the uncontentious choice.Again here also, if a new school is coming up, or a new coaching institute is starting in the vicinity of your household, you would attend a multitude of their demo classes , do research on their faculty's' qualifications, before choosing that particular institute.Hence, to bring home the point, we need previous data of success to evaluate one's competency arrive at a decision.
Why do you think there are entrance tests and interviews at schools or colleges for admissions? Just like parents want to be sure of the success of the institute through their previous years' results, likewise the schools also want to know, their future batch is equally competent or not to face the rigorous academic syllabus.Since for kindergarten students, no such data is available in the form of previous class grades, schools rely on entrance tests to evaluate the new admissions.
Even brands have to prove their competencies again and again, by showing testimonials and survey results of the feedback of their products. And it is because of these very survey results or testimonials which are nothing but equivalent to brands' previous records of success, do we put our faith in that particular brand, and buy their products.This is the very reason to build credibility, that car companies give test drives, and food brands give free tasting samples.
Thus, according to the aforementioned paradigms, I concur that it is of paramount importance to have access to doctor's previous records of treating similarly afflicted patients, to determine whether the doctor is competent or not to treat that medical condition. We are after all placing our lives into the hands of another person, we must be able to trust him or her with our life, hence the criticality of access to previous records.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, look, similarly, so, thus, after all, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2906.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 587.0 442.535393258 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95059625213 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9222030514 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81793009532 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505962521295 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 897.3 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.421146151 60.3974514979 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.538461538 118.986275619 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.1538461538 23.4991977007 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217751517514 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102057502274 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190296971055 0.0758088955206 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129918957209 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151951936728 0.0667264976115 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 14.1392134831 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 100.480337079 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.8971910112 227% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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