An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor s record of treat

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An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treat

Allowing current patients of a doctor to gain easy access to a doctor’s record of treating similar cases in the past will help the patient in ascertaining the best method of treatment to go about, and in deciding the best option for getting their ailment cured.

Health and wellbeing is a very sensitive topic for a person, and ensuring that they are provided with the best possible care and treatment is the responsibility of the doctors, hospital and other medical staff. Now, if the patient is provided with these details, it helps them in choosing the most suitable and proficient doctor who is renowned in that specific procedure for their ailment. The sense of validation provided to them is not a full guarantee that their ailment will be cured, but has the least amount of risk associated with it. Thus, making the process easier for them.

In this case, the patient chooses the doctor of their own accord, knowing beforehand the competency of the doctor, and the risks associated with the procedure. So it also balances out the accountability on both ends . If a certain patient chooses a doctor, informed of all the risks and history associated, they also end up being accountable for the decision if something goes amiss, not lessening the accountability of the doctor in any case.

It provides a patient more insight into the different alternatives available for their treatment, promoting transparency among the doctor and the patient. For instance, if a cancer patient is ready to opt for a risky surgery, knowing all the risks, but his doctor does not provide him with that option, he should be able to assess the situation better looking at his doctor’s previous track record. He can opt for the surgery after consulting the doctor about that option. Also, it should be made sure that these details should in no way harm the doctor-patient confidentiality of the patient’s whose records are being accessed. It should respect the privacy of the other patients involved, and at the same time prove to be insightful for the ailing patient.

Therefore, it can be concluded that providing ailing patients access to their doctor’s medical records regarding the same ailment, might help the patient in discovering the best person for the job, and determining the most apt course of treatment. Provided that it is done in a manner which upholds privacy and promotes cognizance, this method could prove to be very beneficial for treating patients.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nces out the accountability on both ends . If a certain patient chooses a doctor, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in any case

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02433090024 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76620986269 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513381995134 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4343953754 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276225681246 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995009132501 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837730558006 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166071687417 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884192972396 0.0667264976115 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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