All college and university students would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Studying abroad may be one of the most beneficial experiences for a college student.These years a great number of students go abroad to continue their education. In fact studying abroad has some advantages and disadvantages, so I recommend you to read this essay before applying for a foreign university. I as well as many others think that despite the hard situation the students might face, they will greatly benefit from studying in a foreign country at least for one semester, due to experiencing new things and getting ready for their future life.
When you study abroad you are greatly exposed to new things. Here are some
examples. First, there is totally a different culture in another country. When you
study abroad you will find incredible new foods, customs, traditions, ceremonies, and social atmosphere. Many people are interested in learning about another culture, while others may face some problems. It might be hard for them to adjust to this new culture and life style. Second, the language of that country is different from your mother tongue, so you will have the opportunity to learn a new language and practice it with native speakers. Moreover, you could learn idioms and expressions in daily communications. Besides, your university will likely offer language courses to provide you with a formal education. Third, the method of teaching might be different in foreign universities, so you are exposed to new ways and ideas for learning along with
native speakers. Their methods might be much more practical than those of your
own country. Forth, the weather in another country could be completely different from your own country. Lots of people enjoy from this new weather, but some others may face problems. For example a person who have spent all his life in one of the African countries may not be able to tolerate the cold weather of a country such as Canada. As a result he got sick and might fail the courses. Fifth, by studying abroad you have the opportunity to see the world, new environments, natural wonders and landmarks. In spite of all these new
things some people say it is useless to study in a foreign country because you
can learn a language in an institution and learn about cultures from books and internet. They say if you want to see the world you could simply go to travel and continue your education in your own country. But, I still recommend you to go abroad for studying, because you might not have this opportunity in future after you graduate and have a job and family. It is a great opportunity to see the world and learn about different things in real situation.
Studying abroad provides a lot of opportunities for your future life. Here are
some examples. First, you will have more career opportunities. When you finish your study abroad and return home, you will have a new perspective on culture, language skills, and a great education. All these experiences will be very attractive for your future employers. Even if you decide to stay in your host country you can look for a job there. Your education in that country will be very valuable when searching for a career. Second you might find new interest and talents in a foreign country, that if you had stayed at home, you may never have discovered. You might find your undiscovered talents and use them in your future life. Third, you will have the opportunity to meet new life-long friends from different countries. While studying abroad you will live with other foreign students in dormitory, and spend time with students from your host country.
After you graduate from university you can stay in contact with your international friends. These friends can be valuable in your future life. Forth, by studying abroad you will learn to live on your own. It really brings out your independent nature. You will learn how to manage your works without relying on someone else, moreover, you will learn to adapt to diverse situations, and solve your problems alone. Despite these great opportunities some people say you can stay in your country and find a job. They believe studying abroad is just waste of time and money, and you can find international friends in online chats. Yet, I still think it's a great opportunity to study in a foreign country because your experiences and knowledge will be wider than those who stay in their
country with a limited knowledge. In addition chatting cannot replace a true and
real friendship.
To sum up by studying abroad you are exposed to new things and ideas, furthermore, you will have great opportunities for your future life. So take this opportunity to travel the world, and learn about new cultures, and expand your
knowledge in different fields. Then you will gain so many experiences, and will
be ready for your future life and career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 40.0 12.4196629213 322% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 99.0 33.0505617978 300% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 98.0 58.6224719101 167% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4008.0 2235.4752809 179% => OK
No of words: 817.0 442.535393258 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90575275398 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.34632694996 4.55969084622 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63471106767 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 215.323595506 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.365973072215 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1229.4 704.065955056 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 6.24550561798 384% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 46.0 20.2370786517 227% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9664894815 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1304347826 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7608695652 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80434782609 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.97078651685 302% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134202233569 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385289660824 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05226499971 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548862887643 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616082887285 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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