all too often,companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to oparet more efficiently. if companies were to spend more to spend more time listening to their own employees,suction consultants would be unnecessary.
companies hire out side suggested consantlants to suggest ways for the company more efficeantly.i am agree to the statements because the companies is out side conseltent and it is more efficent to the other market and it is very efficently to the work for the company.it is very new creative idea tio these comapany and worker work more efficent work to the comapany.
the consultants in this compancy to consultantst the to the new peoduct new market price new suggesiton to the comapany worker and employees listing to the this new conslten.but new consultants is not work to the proparly and is employees work hard and not suficeant to the work. so it is tell to the boss to new consultants is not to good.
employees is work so hard it tell to the own boss sir we have not sattisfied to the out side consultants
it is not work proparly and not to the benifit o our company.so it is not requid to the company and we have sufficent to the our consultants so we have not reqire to the outside consultants to our company.
comapnies listening to her employees demand and it forgive to the outside consultants and copany work proparly with out out side consultants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Companies
companies hire out side suggested consantlants to...
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Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
companies hire out side suggested consantlants to suggest ways ...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t ways for the company more efficeantly.i am agree to the statements because the ...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...s for the company more efficeantly.i am agree to the statements because the companies...
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Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...the statements because the companies is out side conseltent and it is more efficent to t...
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Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...more efficent work to the comapany. the consultants in this compancy to consult...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew suggesiton to the comapany worker and employees listing to the this new conslt...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...mapany worker and employees listing to the this new conslten.but new consultants is not...
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tants is not work to the proparly and is employees work hard and not suficeant to...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ork hard and not suficeant to the work. so it is tell to the boss to new consultan...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'told'.
Suggestion: told
...and not suficeant to the work. so it is tell to the boss to new consultants is not t...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Employees
...s to new consultants is not to good. employees is work so hard it tell to the own boss...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tells'?
Suggestion: tells
...o good. employees is work so hard it tell to the own boss sir we have not sattisf...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
... boss sir we have not sattisfied to the out side consultants it is not work proparly an...
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Line 6, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enifit o our company.so it is not requid to the company and we have sufficent to ...
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Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...to the company and we have sufficent to the our consultants so we have not reqire to th...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Comapnies
... outside consultants to our company. comapnies listening to her employees demand and ...
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Line 8, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r company. comapnies listening to her employees demand and it forgive to the o...
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Line 8, column 53, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forgives'?
Suggestion: forgives
...stening to her employees demand and it forgive to the outside consultants and copany w...
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Line 8, column 113, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...de consultants and copany work proparly with out out side consultants.
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Line 8, column 118, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: out
...nsultants and copany work proparly with out out side consultants.
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Line 8, column 122, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...tants and copany work proparly with out out side consultants.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239436619718 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.140845070423 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107981220657 0.0880659088768 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0845070422535 0.0497285424764 170% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0657276995305 0.0444667217837 148% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0422535211268 0.12292977631 34% => More prepositions wanted.
Participles: 0.0281690140845 0.0406280797675 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8709773762 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.107981220657 0.030933414821 349% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0234741784038 0.0016655270985 1409% => OK
Determiners: 0.117370892019 0.0997080785238 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0249443105267 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0148568991511 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1176.0 2732.02544248 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 452.878318584 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65384615385 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.58838876751 83% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.283653846154 0.366273622748 77% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245192307692 0.280924506359 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197115384615 0.200843997647 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149038461538 0.132149295362 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8709773762 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 219.290929204 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.379807692308 0.48968727796 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 32.023030983 55.4138127331 58% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 41.6 23.380412469 178% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.762208136 59.4972553346 191% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.2 141.124799967 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.6 23.380412469 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.21349557522 422% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 66.1192307692 51.4728631049 128% => OK
Elegance: 1.06451612903 1.64882698954 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403653523814 0.391690518653 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.457405256104 0.123202303941 371% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.087512673291 0.077325440228 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.950476163391 0.547984918172 173% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0961474178087 0.149214159877 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.294261257048 0.161403998019 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274607204785 0.0892212321368 31% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.482747629414 0.385218514788 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0931361099432 0.0692045440612 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287368691389 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326236326717 0.0653680567796 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.