Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
I disagree that respect for a leader's peers is more important than sound moral judgment. There can be times when a leader has to comprise on making his colleagues happy and make critical decisions that lead to better meant for not only his peers but also the members who look up to him. One such example can be a movie called Freedom writers which was based on true events. Where a white woman goes to teach in a school of blacks, Jews, and other underprivileged children. The other teachers only fulfilled what was required by the school's board but the teacher went above and beyond to help the students with not only their education but also with their personal endeavors to some extent. She fought her colleagues, other staff members, the school board, and the ethics community. The conclusion of her constant struggles was that she was able to call the women who helped Anne Frank rescue the German Soldiers to the school and there she gave a speech to the kids and motivated them to speak their reality and never diminish their light. As a result, every student's story was published as a compilation of the book called "The Freedom Writers". So, I strongly believe that sound moral judgment is the most necessary characteristic of an effective leader.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'go'?
Suggestion: go
...sed on true events. Where a white woman goes to teach in a school of blacks, Jews, a...
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Line 1, column 1060, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...iminish their light. As a result, every students story was published as a compilation of...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 219.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78538812785 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5543527556 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 704.065955056 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4957591632 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183357597932 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876450130881 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11943007113 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183357597932 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.